Reviews for The Return
Sue Dooley chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Terrific!
Irish Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
awwww THIS.
I never wanted her to leave - but this could be a wonderful way to bring her back !
Lovely story. Those two - they never talk !
TIVA FOREVER !
conservativegirl chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Awww, sweet! Awesome story, I was wondering what he was upset about!
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Good story.
Just not sure it's really very hopeful.
clestaffordt chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
As usual, you are a genius with beautiful words and deep meaning. I don't know how you get your ideas. Thanks!

Pls also update the For Chances story.
Sunnyside2 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Ugh. Angst. Me no like angst but this was well written. But you left out the last line, "and they lived happily ever after." p
Darkwriter69 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
nicely written
nando2k50 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Seriously well done, very beautiful...

Terima Kasih...
Loverofallthingsmusic chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Omigosh...this is SOOOO beautiful! Their relationship is so...complicated and emotional and sweet!

Awesome job :)
JustGrace13 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Awwwwww :)
Citty chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Wow you have an amazing style of writing and your use of vocabulary.. just genius!
I'm really looking forward to read more, cause apart from loving how you write, I also more than enjoy what you write ;) xo
Gaby chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Of all the Tivas out there, I like the one in your stories the best. ;)
JENTWCSINYFAN2 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Wow that was hmm wow.
JustBecause2012 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Really, really enjoyed this. It's so Tony and Ziva...getting confused or hurt simply because they DON'T TALK about ANYTHING. (Those crazy kids!) Glad they were able to get things resolved in the story. And that she's staying. Another snippit to add to my head canon! Thanks for writing!
naTIVAlu chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
That moment he was sitting by the dining table with his head in his hands-please, oh please, never again. *Sniff*

"I will take that sweater back, if that's alright with you." Just because it's a really good line :P

And I really appreciated that the only physical contact was their hands at the end. It just seemed... *them*, talking rather than touching to solve an issue, if you know what I mean :P

(And I like the different ending better :P)
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