Reviews for Help me!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/1
Finish the story!
RUBYJEMS chapter 3 . 4/18/2016
this is good
Guest chapter 3 . 6/17/2015
Please write more
Guest chapter 3 . 4/5/2015
Love this. (I LOVE rape fics!)
Would like to see Alvin to gain feelings for hiccup.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/5/2015
Fucking astrid, ruining fanfics
minecraftkorean chapter 3 . 3/3/2015
whaaaaAaaaaaa :( stand down alvin. your DEAD!
Litji chapter 3 . 9/16/2014
Poor Hiccup! Is it wrong i love this story? Please update!
Kas3y chapter 3 . 8/21/2014
Well I did enjoy that. Its nice and Dark. :) Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward till the nxt update. Can u have Hiccup stay there longer than the 2 months. Maybe a year or something. After awhile Alvin forgets about getting him to train the dragons, he just wants to use and abuse him (kinder like pay back to Stoick) I dunno, but keep up the great work.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/4/2014
Awww. Hiccup's so sweet. It's weird how I'm not really affected by the rape, so that shows how sick and twisted I am.
MySweetYaoi49 chapter 3 . 3/12/2014
I hope that your arm heals and have fun at camp :)
TheDemonLady chapter 3 . 3/9/2014

Hope you heal soon!
Rex888 chapter 2 . 3/1/2014
Just thought I'd let you know 12 inches is a bit um... Not impossible, the largest is 14" but the health issues involved would make Alvin a pussy... Pun not intended, he just wouldn't be able to stay standing due to blood rush
Firenze Fox chapter 2 . 3/1/2014
This is really good, poor Hiccup! Update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Great chapter
Can't wait to see what will happen
Firenze Fox chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
Great plot! While I would recommend that you double check your grammar, it's still a brilliant story, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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