Reviews for Avatar of the Gods
firestarter1188 chapter 6 . 1/19/2019
BYE BYE after that stupid twist I am out
Kilare T'suna chapter 15 . 1/19/2019
I absolutely love these DBZ abridged references
qalleesyawesome chapter 15 . 1/19/2019
i kinda dont remember what happen since its been so long. im gonna re read it all but im just gonna put it out there so you know im not abandoning you. anyway stay strong my friend you are love here. take your time in your writing i really dont mind the wait but please dont stop.
AttilaDaHutt chapter 15 . 1/19/2019
Hey man fuck what everyone else says you're one of the few authors that produces several quality fics. So I hope you do what makes you happy and stick to your guns. I hope you can keep your head up and if you want to just talk pm or just want an open ear to rant to pm me
BloodySS2God chapter 15 . 1/19/2019
You pulled an Alucard... In an Avatar story... You BRILLIANT bastard! I did NOT see that coming at all. And I LOVED every second of it lol.

I am just happy that you are well and writing. Cant wait to read more of your stuff! Also dont apologize for the interludes and Author Notes. I very much like to read them too
NeonZangetsu chapter 5 . 1/19/2019
See you guys...well...whenever...I guess.

~a saddened author.
NeonZangetsu chapter 4 . 1/19/2019
Guess some flak was to be expected for trying new ideas...
NeonZangetsu chapter 3 . 1/19/2019
Right then, that tears it.

I try being nice and I get attacked for it.

Maybe I should just take a vacation...
NeonZangetsu chapter 2 . 1/19/2019
I've said from the beginning this is an AU and that its a bit dark.

Apparently some people didn't get the message and have seen fit to express their displeasure...colorful words, to say the least.

God forbid I actually try to update all my stuff only to be harassed like this...

NeonZangetsu chapter 15 . 1/19/2019
Wasn't expecting to get this much flak, jeez...

Maybe I should just stop...
Boblets chapter 5 . 1/19/2019
Yeah nah naruto is to nerfed in this you have somehow given him the juubi and made him weaker than canon, not for me sorry.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/19/2019
Love all your stories really I do, and shit your going through hell I don't really know what to say other than I hope things get better for you someday.
PasiveNox chapter 15 . 1/19/2019
Last Pagan Emperor chapter 15 . 1/19/2019
omg i was waiting for soooooo loooong.. but im glad you're writing again.. you inspired me to watch all the last airbender episodes... so thank you
SynBen28 chapter 4 . 1/19/2019
So, while I find the story interesting, Naruto's powers seem be rather inconsistent in order to fit with the story you want. Like in the first chapter you say that it took 1000 men to kill him before. I would guess that he was going all out, which would definitely require more than 1000. Post 4th war Naruto could level mountain ranges if he wanted to, and he should be way stronger here. Then he punched that Kiyoshi girl with 20% power and she was still able to get back up. If canon Hokage Naruto punched a civilian with 20% power they would instantly die, and this Naruto should be much stronger than that. Then there is him fighting head on for no real reason. He complains about having to deal with those like Zuko and Azula but doesn't use any of the many tools he should have at his disposal to quickly and easily deal with them. Like using the Sharingan to put them in illusions, using the rinnegan to absorb the chi in their bending, using fuinjutsu to immobilize them, using his extreme speed (or hiraishin) to slam something metal into their temples and knock them out, or use that speed to hit pressure points to immobilize them, etc.
Another inconsistency pops out, as well. Naruto said he was previously killed in the early days of the war, so how does he know Iroh? Iroh shouldn't have been born by that point, and there is no mention of Naruto leaving the South pole after reviving, as evidenced by him being shocked and angry when they went to the air temple. Since the air nomads were massacred in the beginning of the war, it would suggest that he hasn't been around the countries since those early days, and thus couldn't have met Iroh what sounds like many years earlier. Hope some of this helps and thanks for the story.
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