Huzzah for feeling better! I sincerely hope that things start looking up for you soon! Keep up the amazing work that you do!

It's suki not tsuki

And I'm starting to lose hope on this story. 'spared the prince on a WHIM?!' what the fuck?

If this is yet another crappy Naruto/Avatar crossover where canon is followed to the letter, I'm packing up and leaving

Why doesn't Naruto just kill Zuko?

A story you should check out for inspiration is A Discordant Note by Noodlehammer. Its' predecessor is called For Love of Magic, where Harry is essentially a sociopath as a result of a different, unique upbringing.

Harry is mellowed out by centuries of living but he's still a nasty motherfucker when he needs to be. There's this eerie line of inner dialogue "men, women, children, wizards and mortals it mattered not who he killed" or something like that, the effects of age are quite felt upon him.

You should use him for inspiration, he writes his stories very well

Your flash forwarding pisses me off... SO MUCH. But that isn't the problem(s) I have with this chapter.

The whole reincarnation born again thing, ultimately doesn't make sense to me. It's utterly unexplained, confusing, and there's also the fact that he supposedly absorbed the Juubi.

How did Naruto come into the Avatar world? We're just supposed to nod our heads and move along, when we have no explanation. The creation of chi and the Avatar is completely unanswered.

Most of all is the absurd power inconsistency. Naruto absorbed the JUUBI, just watch a single fight scene with that abomination in it. It levels mountains like it's crushing a fly, every Bijuu against it whooped their asses, how could the meager Fire Nation kill him? He's lived for eons, he should be so overpowered you can't even make a story about it!

Do his powers reset every time he dies? Does he have suicidal thoughts so he lets himself die?

:/ ?

The Fear Turkey! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
*wheezing*
I know I was looking forward to a tfs reference and here I was jist watching Ozai grumble and then the bird came and I was like... wait those words he used "just... flown right into the throne room. I was like. No... hes not gonna, then Ozai started reading the letter and I was like, he is! then he got to "instill as much fear as possible" it was at this point im at my limit. and then finally "thats right I'm..." it was at that point i lost it

well done King of Naruto Crossovers

Well now, been quite a while since I've read this one. I'm definitely going to enjoy this.
And like any fan, I continue to pray for your health. Why? Cause you're so damn awesome. Nuff said.
Very much feeling the urge to binge Hellsing Abridged again, though.

could your next update be fear not this night?

Sorry for the delay, my health hasn't been the best and I've only recently been able to write again...

Wanted to let you all know I'll be updating soon.

Ok, love the story and the romance keeps it way more interesting. The way you write the arcs goes really well with Naruto and the avatar group. Also, I love how you gave Naruto another role different from Aang and keeps them at an impasse with what needs to be done. I'ld really like to see more from your story.

kurama se sacrfico o ago asi para que no perdiera sus recuerdos xd

SO how does a blind toph read and wright in a journal?

Nooooo it's been 2 years please update

I still find it incredible stupid, naruto lost his so called regeneration but can heal anyone, but not himself. How did you ever get an idea like that. Its idiotic, stupid and most annoying to hear it the whole time, oh I get wounded but can't heal, then stop getting hit by letting it happen.

Annoying as fuck