This story is incredible, you are incredible, so many difficulties you struggle with and you can still write in such a magnificent way; you have all my respect.

I don't undersrand any of this. You keep abruptly changing everybody's personality on a whim and now this is getting more and more confusing

Hey... You alive ?

You know, I feel sometimes that I'm not a super smart guy. Whenever I get down on myself like that, I come to your stories to remind me that someone as fucking stupid as you exists, and then my mind is set at ease. Thank you for your hard work at being such an absolute waste of fucking space. I mean, really, 203 stories, and the only ones your shitty little mind can actually complete aren't even 5k words.

Just go do us all a favor and fuck off before you waste anyone else's time. Go on. Fuck off bitch. Get the fuck off this site, since you're too stupid to actually write anything to completion. Fuck. Off.

... I think naruto just broke dozens of laws because of what he did to azula.

cool.

Firstly, June isn't a tragic character. I can only assume this is a copy and paste from when you spoke about Azula. Don't do that, because it makes the end notes make no sense. June isn't a tragic character so saying she is just doesn't make any sense.

And that brings me to the past two chapters. Naruto came off as the edgiest edge lord that edges beyond the edge of reason. He was edgier than the most edgy gamer tag. My point is there is a prevalent triehard feeling to it. In my opinion (I'm not saying its objective truth or the "right" way to think), you've tried too hard to make him cool and bad ass. Part of the issue is that you're a bit heavy handed in your attempts to convey his cynicism due to his partial immortality. The whole psychotic break here doesn't help.

Hope you update again

Continue with the story? It is very interesting, do not give up

Can’t wait to see more of this story! Of all the stories I read yours have got to be some of the best quality I have ever had the pleasure of reading! Hope you are doing well in these trying times!

Nice Hellsing Ultimate Abridged reference.

Me encanta esta historia Azula podría ser mi personaje favorito junto toph

Hey I hope your health improves, and that someday you will feel up to updating the story, best of luck

Ok, vedy BAMF quotes for the preview, which are strange when Naruto is easily capable of overpowering most masters. I'm glad to hear from this story again, and even noticed the change in the preview phrase... I didn't notice it until now, haha. Good day to you, I'll be waiting.

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just finished this chapter and I'm loving the story