Reviews for Avatar of the Gods |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Neon... we need to find the Holy grail... it can cure your ailment. Now if only Shirou hadn't destroyed it... truly I'm hoping and praying for you. Also if you want please pm me the specifics so I can be more specific as well. I don't think the fanfiction world could handle you departing... One of my other favorites passed away in 13' don't know If I could handle another So just pull through you can do it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Also, he goes on a long talk about not using his powers so Noone will think he's crazy strong.. Then literally a paragraph or two later shows he can manipulate two elements, one being long extinct. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Also, biggest thing I'm getting annoyed with is that Naruto world has very few gods. The only gods they worshipped were ones that were absolutely confirmed to exist. Jashin, Shinigami, and even Pein due to his incredible power. Some even worshipped the tailed beast. If anything, with his power, people would worship Naruto as a God for absorbing Jyuubi, aka the Rabbit Goddess... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope this goes til Korra lol don't let his purpose be in this generation pleaseee lol would love to see this Naruto and Korra together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Also, Zukos Grandfather was the one to kill the previous avatar. Before Aang. So.. A bit inaccurate |
![]() ![]() ![]() "He made for quite a sight", before u only explain he has blue eyes and looks wet. That's all. If ur gonna act like ur gonna describe the MCs current appearance, which will no doubt be different than his first incarnation since Noone in any water tribe.. Hell I don't know anyone in Avatar with blonde hair. Everyone has black or brown hair. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great to see an azula/naruto without it being sealed/naruto. Good job keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see you back on old stories. I just took a nostalgia trip by watching the series and this really caught my eye when I saw it show back up. Can't wait for more no matter what it is. And good luck on all the shit you're going through. I know I would be way worse off mentally than you seem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And its back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so I like how you included alucard and do I detect a hint of team four star vegeta? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your stories are so good. Honestly I have got a love and hate relation with them. I love how awesome the stories are, the characters you create, your version of Naruto like in this case. But at the same time I know that once the words cross 100k its only a matter of time when you will start writing another one, only for this to be updated in a long time or not at all. That makes me hesitant to read them. In short they are like tasty samples to be eaten but you know you can never get the full course. But you are still one amazing writer and I hope that one day I will see a completed story from you. Take care of your health and thanks for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Estare esperando con ansias el próximo capítulo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excelente, maravilloso ,divertido. |
![]() ![]() ![]() always great to see one of your stories updated |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter, can't wait to read more! |