Reviews for The 90th Annual Hunger Games
Radio Free Death chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Opening the story with a character waking up is really cliche. Try for a more original opening.

Diamond sounds like a District One stereotype, obsessed with fashion, acts like a brat, and doesn't have any real redeeming qualities aside from the really flat ambitions about being the best. Scout isn't much better. He's complaining that he's better than anybody, and everyone gives him every advantage possible. It would be great if any of these characters had flaws or more personality aside from their district stereotypes.