Reviews for Mortals: Meet Percy and Annabeth
PJO chapter 3 . 7/20/2017
It has been okay
Sry4CorrectingU chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
Sorry for being nit picky but when Annabeth corrects Percy at the start saying "my friends and I" it should actually be "my friends and me". When you're not sure whether it should be me or I just take out the extra people. Since you're saying "I'll give them back if you promise to hang out with me and my friends..." Take out the friends part to see if "I" or "me" makes sense. You wouldn't say, "hang out with I", you would rather say, "hang out with me" and so me should be used instead of I.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/17/2017
Omg I totally love this
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
Percy's English was right? Me and my friends
Guest chapter 3 . 6/6/2017
Dayum Lacy didnt EVEN get friendzoned
Guest chapter 18 . 5/30/2017
Please make more. Also can you make more with percabeth get married when in high school please
Baron1674 chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
Will this be continued, it's really good?
DazedTorrent chapter 14 . 5/30/2017
I love when they are married
ultimatequeenoffandoms chapter 16 . 4/13/2017
If I wasn't in school I would probably have screamed out loud because of my efgs (excessive fangirling disorder) about a 100 times during this story (and chapter)
It really is amazing, I love it so incredibly much!
Guest chapter 18 . 4/2/2017
This is so good and well written ️️
Bobisdaman chapter 6 . 3/29/2017
Im sorry, but I dont think Annabeth going to Goode is a ~good~ idea.

;) see what I did there?
BlackSwanGirl chapter 18 . 3/18/2017
Okay, this is one of THE BEST Percabeth in high school FanFiction's I have EVER READ. Most are really boring and have no plot base. I have only ever seen like two other ones as good as this one. This was a really good idea, all the one shots. Thank you for writing this, you are amazing.
The 100th Guest chapter 18 . 2/25/2017
Hey, I just want to say when you were talking about the part on how they fit together, it was sorta wrong... Annabeth is actually around the same height as Prlercy and she was taller then him when they were younger. Annabeth is smart with people. It says in the Mark of Athena that it's a life skill. Other than that, Great Job!
kitty22803 chapter 18 . 2/22/2017
Oh my god, so cute! All the time, I was just like, please get married now. All your stories were great! However, leave out the married thing. It's kind of odd to get married at 17. I think they should wait until about 22 or so.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/12/2017
That was long and great
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