Reviews for Mortals: Meet Percy and Annabeth |
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![]() ![]() It has been okay |
![]() ![]() Sorry for being nit picky but when Annabeth corrects Percy at the start saying "my friends and I" it should actually be "my friends and me". When you're not sure whether it should be me or I just take out the extra people. Since you're saying "I'll give them back if you promise to hang out with me and my friends..." Take out the friends part to see if "I" or "me" makes sense. You wouldn't say, "hang out with I", you would rather say, "hang out with me" and so me should be used instead of I. |
![]() ![]() Omg I totally love this |
![]() ![]() Percy's English was right? Me and my friends |
![]() ![]() Dayum Lacy didnt EVEN get friendzoned |
![]() ![]() Please make more. Also can you make more with percabeth get married when in high school please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will this be continued, it's really good? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love when they are married |
![]() ![]() ![]() If I wasn't in school I would probably have screamed out loud because of my efgs (excessive fangirling disorder) about a 100 times during this story (and chapter) It really is amazing, I love it so incredibly much! |
![]() ![]() This is so good and well written ️️ |
![]() ![]() Im sorry, but I dont think Annabeth going to Goode is a ~good~ idea. ;) see what I did there? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this is one of THE BEST Percabeth in high school FanFiction's I have EVER READ. Most are really boring and have no plot base. I have only ever seen like two other ones as good as this one. This was a really good idea, all the one shots. Thank you for writing this, you are amazing. |
![]() ![]() Hey, I just want to say when you were talking about the part on how they fit together, it was sorta wrong... Annabeth is actually around the same height as Prlercy and she was taller then him when they were younger. Annabeth is smart with people. It says in the Mark of Athena that it's a life skill. Other than that, Great Job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, so cute! All the time, I was just like, please get married now. All your stories were great! However, leave out the married thing. It's kind of odd to get married at 17. I think they should wait until about 22 or so. |
![]() ![]() That was long and great |