Reviews for Mortals: Meet Percy and Annabeth |
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![]() ![]() I loved it it's really great |
![]() ![]() Im guessing you like dan and phil ! Btw I love the story! |
![]() ![]() Sorry to bother. This isn't meant to be rude, but there is something I'd like to point out. The proper grammar is actually my friends and I. An easy easy to know this is to take out one of the subjects. You should hand out with me. You should hang out with my friends. That's probably not your exact wording, but that is beside the point. Thank you for your wonderful story. Have a lovely day. ~ Stranger |
![]() ![]() i am the biggest fan of dark percy but i decided to read this for the lols but i was hooked till the end!I wish you update sooner!:):):):):):):)::):):) |
![]() ![]() Dan and Phil really |
![]() ![]() OH MY GODS I FMREAKING LOVE THE SECOND PART THING! #PERCABETHISBAE |
![]() ![]() Younger definitely - aiz |
![]() ![]() Those were the best percabeth stories EVER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, but this is a grammar Nazi moment. If you don't like that, just ignore the review. When Annabeth corrects Percy, it would be "my friends and me." Since Percy would have said "hang out with me" had he been alone, it remains me, not I. It sounds totally wrong, but it's correct. |
![]() ![]() um lacy is a demigod douter of aphrodity |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update? Please? I love these cute little Oneshots *_* |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story |
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