Reviews for Mortals: Meet Percy and Annabeth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha! The last part was pure gold! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAAAAAAHHHHHH I LOVE THE EXPANDED HEADCANON! It's beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! |
![]() ![]() Annabeth's POV wasn't that bad, but it was worse than Percy's. Also, you sometime,s didn't come up with reason for things, like why Lacy was allowed to just waltz out of the room to follow Annabeth and Percy. And you didn't really get their personalities right, I honestly don't believe that Annabeth would blow up like that, but that's just my opinion. |
![]() ![]() It's a great story and I don't want to flame, but it bugs me when people do the whole 'Annabeth corrects Percy on I/me' thing and get it wrong. Remember: to check it you take out the other name and the 'I' and see if it makes sense. This isn't hate, it's just constructive criticism. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so awesome. I like the idea of Annabeth being friends with Percy's friends |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tbh I started watching Dan and Phil in the beginning of last month (April 8) and OMFG I SHIP PHAN SO HARD NOW ASFJKDSFJKL |
![]() ![]() ![]() ANNABETH WATCHES SPN NEW HEADCANON OMG |
![]() ![]() It was nice like peaceful like relaxing like tranquil ya all those things |
![]() ![]() Oh gods I love it soooo much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! |
![]() ![]() Dan and Phil lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT! THANKS FOR THE UPDATE! YOU ROCK :) |
![]() ![]() Next one or more. Yeso much more please there great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaawwwww...Really don't know what to was beautiful... .This was "Awww!" |