Reviews for Mortals: Meet Percy and Annabeth
tv123 chapter 15 . 6/20/2016
Hahaha! The last part was pure gold!
tv123 chapter 10 . 6/20/2016
AAAAAAAHHHHHH
I LOVE THE EXPANDED HEADCANON!
It's beautiful!
tv123 chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
This is great!
Hi chapter 3 . 6/12/2016
Annabeth's POV wasn't that bad, but it was worse than Percy's. Also, you sometime,s didn't come up with reason for things, like why Lacy was allowed to just waltz out of the room to follow Annabeth and Percy. And you didn't really get their personalities right, I honestly don't believe that Annabeth would blow up like that, but that's just my opinion.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
It's a great story and I don't want to flame, but it bugs me when people do the whole 'Annabeth corrects Percy on I/me' thing and get it wrong. Remember: to check it you take out the other name and the 'I' and see if it makes sense. This isn't hate, it's just constructive criticism.
DemigodSassReaders chapter 14 . 5/29/2016
so awesome. I like the idea of Annabeth being friends with Percy's friends
Daughter Poseidon chapter 16 . 5/8/2016
Tbh I started watching Dan and Phil in the beginning of last month (April 8) and OMFG I SHIP PHAN SO HARD NOW ASFJKDSFJKL
Origamidragons chapter 16 . 5/4/2016
ANNABETH WATCHES SPN NEW HEADCANON OMG
Maddie chapter 10 . 5/1/2016
It was nice like peaceful like relaxing like tranquil ya all those things
Maddie chapter 9 . 5/1/2016
Oh gods I love it soooo much
infinitygalaxies.infinitystars chapter 18 . 4/30/2016
Aw!
Madz chapter 16 . 4/24/2016
Dan and Phil lol
ObssessedwithBooks chapter 18 . 3/29/2016
LOVED IT! THANKS FOR THE UPDATE! YOU ROCK :)
Guest chapter 18 . 3/15/2016
Next one or more. Yeso much more please there great
MariHofferson chapter 18 . 3/10/2016
Aaaawwwww...Really don't know what to was beautiful... .This was "Awww!"
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