Reviews for Mortals: Meet Percy and Annabeth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha That was amusing! Make more dude! How about a sequel to the previous chapter? Or some jocks plan on trashing a Halfblood party and end up chewing more than they bargained for? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say... Love it! This was amazing! Oh, you should write dialogues in separate lines so it is more neat that way |
![]() ![]() Awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! I like this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh and cool name... PERCABETH FOREVER |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stupid lacy oh and BEST CHAPTER EVER. Everyone loves a jealous mortal This stary is a fav |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it and think its great! please continue and annabeths pov wasn't half bad... definitely better than a lot of others ive read. you've got a really nice story going here; I hope to see another update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is me and my friends... If you take out my friends you have hang out with me, I you took out my friends in my friends and I you would have hang out with I |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought you were friends with Percy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! That was hilarious! I loved this chapter! I loved the previous chapter as well! Oh god! This is awesome! How about some mortals at school meet a big three kids fight and Annabeth refereeing them |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cracked up at the hazel part! Great story, please continue! Next chapter you should have one of Percy's friends walk in on them kissing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This really cool! I think these kinds of stories are really cool. :) |