|Reviews for TransShift|
| timkaylor885 chapter 2 . 2/28
That was excellent
| Inferius1957 chapter 2 . 2/28
Wooooow...now this is a story this will e stored in my Zombie proof vault and added to my story alerts.
Well done by the way.
| HP-DG-SB-HA-RR-KB-NT-TD-LL-AJ chapter 2 . 2/25
The first question I have is; are you sure this story shouldn't be rated M? Beyond that, I think this story is going pretty well, its nice and interesting. The first chapter kind of creeped me out though. And it is also the reason why I ask if you shouldn't have rated this story as "M". Anyways, keep up the great work and I hope that you'll update again soon.
| plums chapter 2 . 2/24
All good except for the pity party he had for Ginny Weasley. For the most part if people are reading an "alt-pairing" like Daphne or Astoria, they have no desire whatever to die Ginny Weasley in the story in any prominent way.
Besides that... Interesting rant on stage. Looking forward to your next update.
| ALPHAQ69 chapter 2 . 2/24
harry might have touched Dumbles or Voldy atleast once...so he has their memories? voldy in graveyard and dumbles sometime during 4 years of hogwarts...
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/19
very good, loved
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 2/17
| AndreyKl chapter 2 . 2/17
The way Harry talked on the conference any other person would have been thrown out.
May be all that insults in Harry's language can be limited a bit, while the story and powers are somewhat promising, all that language is making it harder to read.
| tiger982305 chapter 2 . 2/16
awesome I am really looking forward to where this goes.
| Byakugan789 chapter 2 . 2/16
Actually the wizards wouldn't be too curious about him being in girls cloths, so much as being in muggle cloths. Wizards are largely color blind or so it seems and enough of them have trouble recognizing how to coordinate muggle clothing that he'd only get stared at for the fact that he was wearing them in diagon alley and not a muggle parent with their magic kid.
Nice little temper tantrum there at the end. Just... if you ever continue this, dont' toss out Tonks. Remus is fine, he's spent too much of his leash moaning about how being a wolf is a worthy excuse to do nothing and kissing dumbledores ass.
| Byakugan789 chapter 1 . 2/16
Ron I can understand being stupid enough to attack Harry over this, but Fred and George? You have to be smart, motivated and clever to make something new and the Twins have been making 'new' since second year, something most adult wizards aren't able to accomplish.
As for hermione liking Ron, she didn't entertain the thought until the fight over the yule ball, and even then it still took her two years to even consider the relationship. She's been far more loyal to and showing interst in Harry over the previous five books. JKR said in an interview that Hermione's first and long time crush was Harry and she'd originally planned to set Hermione up with fred, but got beset by a fit of writers block whenever she tried to write it.
Definitely interesting idea on shapeshifting though.
Looking forward to more. Pitty you didn't do more than just the next chapter.
| branchkk65 chapter 2 . 2/11
Great chapter! Looking forward for more chapters. Loved the attitude of Harry. It's about time for Harry to get angry at Dumbledore.
| Sakura Lisel chapter 1 . 2/13
Ron's an idiot. How can he blame Harry for what happened to his dad, when Harry has an ALIBI for where he was when Arthur was attacked, which Ron should know since Harry probably WOKE HIM UP with his SCREAMS of terror as he helplessly watched Arthur getting attacked by Nagini through Nagini's eyes while he was ASLEEP in bed in the same dorm room he shared with Ron. So exactly when and where does Ron think Harry personally attacked his dad when he was sound asleep in bed when the attack happened? *lol*
| anarion87 chapter 2 . 2/12
good so far
| Radars Kin chapter 2 . 2/10
I like how you have made Harry more of a man than any other author has done.I think if Harry had found out what was happening to him he would nreact exactly as you have had him keep up this great story.