|Reviews for Of Fathers and Godfathers|
| lojosmom chapter 16 . 8/27
Please add more to this. I want to see them each confront The Room and we still don't know if Ron survives.
| lojosmom chapter 1 . 8/26
I just started reading your story and I am hooked. Great job!
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/20
Wicked story, please continue!
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 7 . 7/9
This is my bus stop to exit. Canon pairings suck big time, especially Harry/Ginny.
I already wasn't happy with the story because even Dumbledore isn't stupid enough to make Harry mourn Sirius's death an unnecessary month, and no adults in their right mind, especially Sirius and James, would go along with it.
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 5 . 7/9
Why is Harry thanking Ron for the birthday presents? His birthday isn't until halfway through summer vacation. He hasn't had to wait that long has he?
If you're considering a character death, make it Ginny. No fair killing off anybody important, like James or Sirius. Make it fangirl.
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 4 . 7/9
It's annoying when you write "the Potter" and "the Black". Just write "Potter" and "Black" please.
The Marauders kept their Animagus forms secret from all the staff including Dumbledore and McGonagall.
"Kingsley", not "Kingsely".
It would be stupid to wait a week to tell Harry. He's currently grieving the loss of Sirius. He needs to be told immediately. What good would come from waiting? Why does he have to be at the Dursleys first? They actually have their priorities skewed to tell Dumbledore before Harry. Harry is immediate family. Dumbledore is just somebody who acts like he knows everything, and everybody should look up to him.
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 3 . 7/9
The information about Remus's eye color being green comes from a noncanonical movie prop. It's a form from the Muggleborn Registration Commission and was not filled out or signed by Lupin himself; and because of the bureaucratic chaos of the Ministry of Magic it's almost guaranteed to contain errors. It's quite a nonsensical bit of information because in the same movies Lupin's eye color is clearly blue, as can be seen from the still photographs at the HP wiki of the actor David Thewlis playing the part. Note that the same document got his height wrong too, since David Thewlis is actually 6'3", not 6'2". It's important that in the books only Harry, Lily and Dobby are described as having green eyes. If lots of people have them then they aren't special and don't indicate that a special connection exists. Symbolically it says a lot about Harry's personality that he's got his mother's eyes and he grew up just like an abused house elf.
A stag is not maroon. Maroon is a dark blood red or claret wine color with a lot of purple in it. Red deer stags are a somewhat lighter reddish brown color with no purple tint whatsoever (brown is actually a dark, muted shade of orange). Accoring to wikipedia maroon comes from the French marron meaning chestnut, but in English maroon is no longer a synonym for chestnut. They describe quite distinct colors. Chestnut *is* an appropriate color to describe red deer.
"Lily and I immediately knew", not "Lily and me immediately knew". Never use objective pronouns in subjects.
"wander around", not "wonder around".
"much simpler", not "must simpler".
| gleefan2009 chapter 16 . 6/6
love it please write more
| KaiaRenkin chapter 16 . 5/7
Please update soon XD!
| andjelija.nenic chapter 6 . 4/28
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
| Nik1627 chapter 16 . 12/19/2015
Amazing story! Love it! Hope u update soon!
| magicaltears chapter 8 . 4/25/2015
I really wanted to like this fic and the writing is very good on it. However I did not like how immature Sirius and James were acting...they had both grown up before James died and Sirius was sent to Azkaban. However I was planning on continuing but as soon as James agreed to allow Harry to return to the Dursleys I could not continue. I do not see a real parent ever allowing their child to go back to an abusive home regardless of the reasoning. You are an a fantastic writer but this is just not for me.
| ShaiGar chapter 16 . 4/10/2015
Ahh, not just that, but Hermione should not know anything about James yet. She's rational and observant which would allow her to come up with that list of strengths and weaknesses about the others who she has seen in combat, but she's not seen James enough, or known him long enough to know any of that. Turning to him she could simply say "I don't know you yet" and that wouldn't ruin the little bit of the story you've written after that. It'd also be honest.
She might be able to infer some things about him from the one fight she saw, but she's rational enough to know that one instance is not enough to get a handle on a person with. Similarly Bill and Charlie to a lesser extent.
| fan chapter 12 . 3/18/2015
| fan chapter 8 . 3/18/2015
I just habe to ASK why do they always do what dumbles wants? It's maddening!