I liked the story but the grammar was hard to follow. If English is not your first language well done and keep practicing, if it is I really suggest you proof read. In both cases I also suggest letting someone who speaks English as a first language read your story before posting, to correct the grammar, although the spelling was spot on. Good Work :)

Love it! Leon and Claire are so funny here. They're such cute friends. And Jake and Sherry are such a sweet couple! I hope to read more of your works soon! :D

Leon is the worst driver in history lol

This definitely made me laugh. Glad you posted it :D
I look forward to your new fic! The lack of Jake/Sherry fics/fans alike is disheartening. :(

:D LOL! It's true! Leon is a terrible driver. NICE JOB!

Leon & Jake... Wrong combination, but at the end it goes so well. There is no romance, but this story is fun & interesting :D Poor Claire, ahaha.
Waiting for your next story!