Reviews for DIGIMON: story of the 8th demon lord
tibarion chapter 9 . 7/18/2014
Wool, another chapter! :D I thought it was getting to the point where Maia would not hate Bezel anymore, which would be annoying this early, but those 4 bite holes beg to differ.

Lilithmon is awesome, she's my favorite Demon Lord (maybe we can see more of her *wink*wink* cough*cough*), but where was she when Maia was missing? You'd think she would have an eye on her considering Bezel is snooping around.

Eh, whatever. Another great chapter though! Keep up the good work!
tibarion chapter 8 . 6/24/2014
Don't like him. Hope he gets destroyed. Not killed, he fits a good villain, just severely punished. That skrub
Nightmon chapter 7 . 6/22/2014
More,more,more,please! I love how this is going.
tibarion chapter 7 . 6/21/2014
Love it! Thanks for updating! Is she going to be the Demon Lord of Insanity? That's a little hypothesis I have. More lilithmon! There's not enough fics with her sadly.
tibarion chapter 6 . 4/2/2014
I came here for lilithmon. Thank you and please update. When you said hiatus I thought I better leave a review xD
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 5 . 1/21/2014
Interesting views on Lilithmon's actions:)
MitzvahRose chapter 5 . 1/21/2014
Well, my last review was quite embarrassing... *Sweatdrops* Woops, lol xP

Okay, so I wanted to say sorry for not reviewing in a while. Don't worry, I'm still watching this story, and trust me, you are getting better! :D

First of all, I guess I was wrong with Carry. Second, gruesome and definitely not my thing to read normally, sorry... Third, what exactly is she feeling? Interesting, but quite confusing... Fourth, cute (if cruel) moment from "Kenny". Fifth, poor policemen... Sixth, epic entrance from Beelzemon! Seventh, even EPIC-ER exit! XD Eighth, is Maia invincible or something?! O.O Ninth, oh my... G-d... Maia... Her mom... Tenth, just... B-Beelzemon! O.O! Never thought I'd say this, but thank goodness for Lilithmon! D:
*Takes a deep breath* ...And that's all I've got.

Awesome story so far, though extremely freaky. I don't normally go for this (at all), but I think this one passes... I do like the story, after all. :) ...Still freaky though. Regardless, keep up the good work!

Btw, bus isn't spelled with 2 s'.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 4 . 12/31/2013
This'll be fun:)
the kishins darkness chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
interesting i hope to see this completed
MitzvahRose chapter 2 . 12/12/2013
I tried to continue my last review 'cause I got cut off... did it not go through? :(

...I'm sorry to say, but I ain't typing that couple paragraphs again. Mostly 'cause I can't remember it all... -.-
MitzvahRose chapter 2 . 12/12/2013
...My review was cutoff. -.-

Anyways, violent, but good. Though, I can't say I normally go for the gore writing, I admit that it was well done.

I didn't think Bee would save the day (I think he's one of the guests Maia's 'posed to meet), but still! She tore his arm off... dang, that girl's brutal! And not just that, I'm pretty sure I saw all of the sins in her... except maybe Lust. That's her guardian's "talent". Btw, I'm beginning to think said guardian is Lilithmon in disguise. Am I close? xD

Onto the advice...
Aside from grammar and spelling errors here and there ('sins' instead of 'since', for example) I thought it was well done. The only thing that sticks out at me at the current time is the way you had Matt think. It was kinda strange for him to think to himself in the third-person, lol :P

So, that's all I got this time. Keep up the great work!
MitzvahRose chapter 2 . 12/12/2013
Well, glad I could help! And thanks so much for the, well, thank you! :D
But seriously? 3 am? Thanks a ton, but don't forget to sleep! XD

On to the story...

*Gapes*
Holy. Slaggin'. Crap. O.O There is little else to say aside from that you certainly surprised me! No kidding it was violent!
MitzvahRose chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
*Blinks a couple times before "squee"ing*
WOOT! That was AWESOME! XD

I really, really hope you continue this soon, even if you have only just published it. Personally, I so far love the idea. Beelzemon's being portrayed perfectly, if dramatically (lol xP) and the rest of the Demon Lords fantastically as well! :D
Though I must ask, even though I am one, why does it seem to always be a girl the Lords capture? lol xD

On a slightly different note, I have a few suggestions on how to improve this. I'm no editor, but I've noticed you use a... lot of commas. I mean a LOT. Try to tone it down a bit, break 'em up into different sentences. I hope that makes sense and helps. :) So... 'Till next time! :D