|Reviews for Timed Collision|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
Perfect third person writing. I felt joyful and loss and so much heart in just 8000 words
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
So sad to love someone like that.
| soniabell chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
I will find this Bella and slap the shit out of her, then I would take him to one of those professionals that specialize in reprogramming cult members and then he would be mine...muaaaaaaaaw.
| Erikajo chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Oh man. That was so brutal in a good way of course. :)
| jedigirlsc chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
That was very sad! Poor Edward. Good writing.
| sophiacorgi chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Oh, my heart! Poor Edward. Great entry and good luck!
| kmfroggi chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Damn Bella! Killing the poor guy... Geesh!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I loved the comparisons at the end of each section, I thought that was very clever. Very well done. :)
| oasispurple chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
great story, thank you! :)
| Annie chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Wow, I'm heartbroken
| lil hummingbird chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Beautiful and heart breaking
| Dream-with-your-heart chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Have you ever thought of doing a follow up to this? Maybe in Bella's POV? I'd like to read that very much.
| ibleedscarletandgray chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Wow - that's just so sad. Very well done!
| debslmac chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Loved this. So sad... Poor Edward
| Mrs.Lautner.Wolf chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
That was . . . Intense. And extremely emotional. I don't exactly know how I feel, but in a good way, of course. Great job.