Reviews for Dancing In The Dark
GelidReya chapter 3 . 8/3
Really good! Hope u update_
ctofi1 chapter 3 . 6/4
mise à jour quand ?
ytygr chapter 3 . 12/18/2014
Are you going to update this one anytime soon it's been 10 months
Zayabel Draga chapter 3 . 11/21/2014
Aahngg I love you so much, please update soon!
pollyped chapter 3 . 11/10/2014
you have my interest.
a bit verbose, but very well written.
need more chapters.
thank you..
jhoang6 chapter 3 . 8/28/2014
Loving the complexity of the tale. Can't wait for more
ctofi1 chapter 2 . 5/24/2014
j'ai vraiment pris beaucoup de plaisir, a lire ta fic .
j'espère lire la suite très vite .
merci pour ce nouveau chapitre .
XxxBellaBellaxxX chapter 3 . 5/23/2014
Please please update soon :) can't wait to see the captains reactions to Isshins appearance :)
d'ihshtri chapter 3 . 4/24/2014
original and interesting. i like it.
KaiBlueOtaku chapter 3 . 4/5/2014
I wonder at the meaning of some of Juha Bach's words, is this a foreshadowing of things to come? Ah, but I won't ruin any fun plot twists you may have planned... This has me excited, but please, don't let me distract you from your focus as you work through your planned updates and I read my way through your other works. I will leave my nicest, most thorough reviews on completed works, so expect a solid review on whatever you complete next! For now though, this;

Being so far behind in the manga, I have to take for granted the information presented here in regards to its relation to canon. That aside, I am enjoying the plot thus far. The main players are all very true to character, right down to Ichigo's stubborn refusal to obey Shunsui's orders to stay put. Shunsui is very calm and gentle, and I am curious to find out how the lemon will work in this, considering you brought Isshin onto the scene, and I suspect the protective father will be reluctant to stray far from his wounded child.

I could smell the smoke in the air, and feel the rain. This was tactile, always a sign of quality writing, and the earmark of your handiwork.

Ichigo's despair was disconcerting, but did feel entirely justified, and not overdone, as I would have initially suspected after three chapters of it. Having only been a few days since his injuries, this is well-timed. He would probably be in his deepest throes of grief around this time, after having survived his grave injuries, and now coming to terms with his disability and, essentially, post traumatic stress.

Overall, an intriguing story line up to this point, with a depth of angst and pain which I hope to see a bit of resolution of in the next chapter. I'm very curious also why he is so drawn to Shunsui, but as promised, I will wait until the next chapter update for that. I have plenty else to occupy me until then; hold your focus where you feel the most called and productive. Kudos to you.
Ayronya chapter 3 . 3/24/2014
Utterly amazing, can't wait for the next update
Mayuzu chapter 3 . 2/28/2014
New fic of GinIchi? Oh I wouldn't want to miss it!
Err, but before that, I just want to say I love the characterization of Isshin here. He's such a caring and loving father and his past of being so powerful and influential is so fitting. I don't know how Isshin will react when Shunsui gets romantically involved with Ichigo though *grin*
MerryKitten chapter 3 . 2/27/2014
Terror, shame and grief really aren't emotions you want to feel at the same time and to this extend, are they? Makes me uncomfortable to even think about what Ichi's going through. And naturally Shun is awesome! (Doh :D)
Kris chapter 3 . 2/26/2014
Just quickly leaving a review to say how much I love your writing style. Its very descriptive and well thought out. I'm eagerly awaiting for your next update.
MerryKitten chapter 2 . 2/13/2014
Deeper into the nightmare! But I do enjoy dark fics, so it's fine. Thanks!
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