Reviews for Breathless
SleepyShizu chapter 1 . 6/23
Aww, this was adorable. I also want the girly Weiss giggle to be canon. That would be so cute.
WeirdRaptor chapter 1 . 7/28/2016
I've actually known people who get bummed out by not getting perfect grades. It's ridiculous and this fic captures the "wtf" feeling everyone else gets around perfectionists when their tendencies get the better of them.
EndlessChains chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
A well done story. A endearing story where Ruby helps Weiss feel better. I could see Weiss being depressed about a grade that wasn't up to her standards and Ruby coming along and making her feel better in the most unconventional of ways. An adorable way to make a person forget that is for sure and it looked like they both had fun as well. It was quite enjoyable. Thank you. Keep up the good work
mikotyzini chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Awesome. Weiss so lost that tickle fight. So cute that she didn't know how to tickle someone!
Scourge From BloodClan chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
That always happens ( stupid dumb misunderstandings )
iceandfire66 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
You really showed the perfectionist side of Weiss in this. Great job!
apple.huang.56211 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Love it! Weiss is SOOOOOOO CUTE! She must be totally exhausted. lol. Tickle fight is great! The kiss is awesome:)
Kane anonymous chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Pretty top! Needed more romance though, good job though!

-Kane
CatsThatBark chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
This story was way too cute. Great job with everything, the writing flowed nicely. Definitely one of my favorite fics. 10/10. :)
Franbell chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Loved it :3 the fluff and characters were spot on, i'd love to see more of this pairing coming from you ;)
Techno Skittles chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
So I finally got around to reading this because I'm just really slow :/ But a;fhkauwfe tickle fights are just so cute and the ending is just...it made me smile so hard
williamwz3 chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Who knew Ruby had it in her to do that? XD really funny to see Weiss OOC for even a moment, like that time she was drunk. I really liked this one, so keep up the good work.
Spikesagitta chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Sooooo cute! Fluffy White Rose! Nice :)
Tear of Light chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This was adorable! I had a good laugh at Yang and Blake's reactions at the end. Seriously, what were they thinking? Lol. XD
fireprooflawyer chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This was both cute and fluffy, We'll done my friend, you have made my day 8)
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