“brushing your teeth with that method” Bwahahahahahaha!

Well I finally caught up . I was about five chapters behind and unfortunately with this story that can take a moment to read, but it was worth it. I like d the conversation between Kasumi and Soun. I look forward to the reveal down the road. This story while at times long winded has turned into one of my favorites over the last few years. I will say I want to see more of the others besides Aiko get screen time. I enjoy her,but I like the others to. That said looking forward to the next arc.

Ps Luna and only Luna would 've a nice fit in this universe.

“This is from a licensed supplier” Why do I get the feeling that Yori and Chou will spend some time healing fugu poisoning?

“collapsed on the table” Bingo!

“There's no trace of tetradotoxin poisoning” Or Not! ;-p (I will confess that I was expecting a somewhat complex plot by a rival to murder the Théberge patriarch… ;-p)

“Hey! Where did he go?” Bwahahahahahaha! No need for a description! I’m sure I know who the witness is! ;-p (probably fled when he heard the amount for the damages…)

“charging Davenport with contributory negligence over the portal device, since he knew where it was months ago and didn't tell anyone, which could have prevented all this from happening in the first place” OK! You can forget my comment about that exact fact in chapter 46! ;-p

“Him. What the hell is he doing here?” Bwahahahahahahaha!

“He stopped to take a breath” :-D Excellent! I really didn’t think you would use him again after LA! :-) Poor Yori! The only good thing is that the odds of finding him again when they go after the buyer are low… Aren’t they? ;-p

“I got three this time all on my own.” Bwahahahahahahaha!

“theoretically secure radio link” :-D I love those little of comments! ;-p

Aah! Ms Aoyama! :-) And to think Nabiki thinks she is not made for that life… ;-p

“Yori looked slightly insulted. Chou nudged her, smiling gently.” Bwahahahahahaha!

I find that they were very lenient with Davenport! I mean: had he done his job and raised the alert, there would have been no death! They may even have been able to find the portal bomb before it left Australia, long before it activated! In my mind, he is as much responsible for the deaths than Murray! Way more than Václav Sklár!

A great setup, your writing definitely does the situation justice, and the part in crime was a good touch, but I have some questions
1 when in the timeline is this? Is it pre ki blast, or was this one in particular just impressive
2 why hasn't Nabiki bailed too?

“very odd expressions. He sympathised.” I do think they were simply trying not to laugh out loud! :-D

“Probably intimidated it into submission.” Bwahahahahahaha!

I love Ms Aoyama! I laugh out loud each time she appears! :-D

“and probed carefully...” :-D “Six times in twenty minutes” Bwahahahahahaha!

“Nabiki launched herself at him across the coffee-table with a howl of rage.” Bwahahahahahaha!

“That was stage six” Ooh… Sneaky! ;-p

“the training was brutal. You have no idea what that's like” You know… I wonder what Cologne would say about Ranma’s training methods… (probably exchange tips ;-p)

“The lady told me to.” Bwahahahahaha! “but it was the other one. The scary one.” Bwahahahahahahaha! You made me laugh to tears! :-D

An hilarious end for this chapter! Thanks!

“Me speak some words, understand cow” Bwahahahahaha!

“San Francisco” Bwahahahahahaha! Yes! Teleportation IS in her blood! ;-p

“She pulled a chopstick out of her ear” Bwahahahahaha!

“Bring poison. No. That's too slow. Bring fire...” Bwahahahahahahaha! And here I thought that Soun had some kind of arachnophobia… ;-p

“and get the spikes set up.” Bwahahahahaha! Ranma DID learn from Genma! ;-p

“Accountancy meditation” :-D

Poor Nabiki! She caught the Magical Girl curse: She now attracts baddies! ;-p

“As she was beginning her scan there was a very odd energy surge which completely blocked it” So… The building really likes her? (will she forget, like Cologne? ;-p)

I just can’t help but wonder if Ami Mizuno was looking for Nabiki, or something else…

Bwahahahaha!
Excellent ending for this chapter! :-D

ARGH! WANT! Do you have any spare Kw'lyn Industries Mark Nine Gamma secure communications and sensory system? I want one! ;-p

“I'll record some of it and send it to you.” … Just realized: She is going to see a movie… Hollywood would have those phones banned as soon as they learned about this function!

“He momentarily dropped his eyes, suddenly feeling slightly ashamed, before coming to his senses” Yori channelling Chou? ;-p

“He'd practised it for ages in the mirror” Bwahahahahahaha!

“I know. She must be getting tired.” Bwahahahahahaha!

“Stage one, no imminent danger, but safeties unlocked” :-) Nice!

“So does Chou.” Bwahahahaha!

Serena’s interrogation of Yori was hilarious!

“We're not shooting any martial arts ones I'm aware of at the moment.” Bwahahahahahaha! It figures! Should he see Yori and co there, he will NEVER believe they are not actress! ;-p

“They're all impossible. Some more than others.” :-) Very nice! I’ll have to remember this one! ;-p

A nice funny (and long!) chapter!

Thanks!

“We happen to own a huge apartment building.” Ah! I was wondering how long until they remembered that point!

“The sunglasses she was holding evaporated out of her hand” After the mermaid trick, I really wonder how much real it really is: an illusion shouldn’t have been able to improve Nabiki’s abilities swimming-wise! (I wouldn’t be surprised if, using it as much as they do, they didn’t realize it improved! Either that, or Nabiki somehow tapped into her latent ki abilities…)