Reviews for Desperately Seeking Ranma |
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marlastiano chapter 95 . 1/31/2016 Good |
shugokage chapter 94 . 1/20/2016 Definitely another very interesting chapter good job! |
Uriel Godfire chapter 94 . 1/20/2016 I did some research, but in case you didn't know, this is now officially the longest Ranma fan fiction on , the next largest clocks in at a mere 1.31 mil words compared to your 1.33 mil. Congrats, and keep it up, I enjoy this story immensely. |
RobC chapter 92 . 1/19/2016 I can't believe I'm reading an UNFINISHED story of over a million words, but your writing and story have sucked me in! Very well done. |
WildReaders chapter 94 . 1/19/2016 Humm... nabiki et al looks like they're going to busy finding the threads of this conspiracy which might explain how or why magic doesn't seem to be widely known in the U.S in this story result the magical mob been suppressing it? Haruka might have a location for a job if the joining the semi-pro racing circuit is a bust. |
Kilroy chapter 94 . 1/19/2016 Considering recent events, perhaps Anthony Murray and Václav should be re-interrogated for more about their contacts and "friends". Looking back, I have to wonder if Murray's story about trying to convert the portal bomb to a material transport system is actually a cover story. I enjoyed the Top Gear allusions in the Haruka car-buying sub-plot, but wonder whether it really moves the overall plot forward. |
SAMarcus chapter 94 . 1/19/2016 The crack about British cars being pretty but needing Japanese engineering should be a sales slogan somewhere. It's too perfect! |
forbinkun chapter 94 . 1/18/2016 Sorry for the lack of reviews, I have been reading this on my kindle and realized it had been several chapters. The bank incident seemed at first like a throw-in, but it clearly was not. I think that the hidden plot coming out of happy fluff is what I like best about this story. It is now into a definite third ark, who knows how deep the new trouble will run? In any case, very glad you are updating still, happy to see and follow each new episode. Sever authors of fanfiction should think about writing professionally. You unquestionably belong in that group. Simply good fun. |
Dumbledork chapter 94 . 1/18/2016 I'm very happy that the Akane and Shampoo centric chapters are over and done with. I really enjoyed this one. |
Coenraad chapter 1 . 1/18/2016 awesome chapter once again. liking the bitesized chapters but certainly don't mind the huge ones. BTW: I noticed you missed one instance of Misaki being in two places at once. here is a direct quote of said instance so you can find it more easily: beside him tinnin wobbled a little, gratefully taking the bottle of water Misaka woordlessly handed him and drinking from it. keep it up! |
Star Iron chapter 6 . 1/17/2016 So are Ranma and Kasumi effectively immortal now? |
gort420 chapter 94 . 1/17/2016 excellent chapter, I was thinking rouge nation from the last chapter, akane seems well enough for ranma and kasumi to reveal themselves. Keep it up. |
TJG1 chapter 94 . 1/17/2016 I wonder if there will be a point at which they will have their alien friends put up some super spy stealth satellites in high earth orbits so that they can do detailed scans to track down the mysterious group. |
Rune Tobor chapter 94 . 1/17/2016 FUN! And you finished the "new car" plot point mentioned a few chapters ago. Better is the development of a worthy adversary for Yori and company. The Portal Bomb crew was not that smart. Dangerous yes but not the smartest or even very well equipped. The Time Machine was also dumb if exceedingly powerful. This new group has brains, backing, training, numbers, equipment, is well established, and will be a good long term enemy. The only advantages the Sisterhood of Doom has on them seems to be magic and the SI units. I'd have a government agency make a few contributions to the case occasionally, having the Sisterhood solve everything would be a mistake. Thanks! |
god of all chapter 94 . 1/17/2016 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |