A very enjoyable chapter thats progressing the newest threat plotline while having some fun with cars. Im hoping Haruka will become friends with more of the magical girls so she and Hotaru will show up more often. Id say the chapter length is still really good, much longer than most authors so no need to worry about it being short. Cant wait for the next.

For a 'T' rated fic, this is a kick-ass fic. Normally I don't bother too much with this rating, but with your story...thus far...I have to say, impressive.

I am a little curious, who is supposed to be the main character in this fic? Nabiki? Ranma and Kasumi? Akane and Xain Pu? They all have impressive parts to the fic, but it would be nice to understand who the prognatic(sp?) one or two are.

Lookin' forward to your next chapter.

Really enjoyed reading another chapter of your great story, even if I did miss a lot of sleep when I saw it and could not wait til morning to start reading. Notice an error you might want to fix towards the end. May have been others but this one I remembered as it was at the end.

"Agent Tinnin has been going over the information she (send) both of you and seems to think it all holds together well."

You had the wrong tense, using send rather than sent.

Interesting continuation you have here. More information on the mysterious world cabal and Haruka has a new car. But you know what worries me? At some point in the future Haruka is going to teach Hotaru how to drive; probably in the Yori-themed were-Jaguar. The mind boggles at the thought!

Chou needs to come up with a spell to mitigate the effects of lack-of-sleep for their law-enforcement liasons. Please mention it to her.

Nabiki may think there's enough food to feed the 'Sisterhood of Doom', but just for fun you should have Aiko pop out for a couple of New York pizzas to compare against Ukyo's okonomiyaki.

Next chapter, soon?

To be honest, I am highly relieved the hazing America angle is plot-driven. Don't get me wrong, my country has a lot of problems, but we're not the only ones! The fact that the hazing seemed exclusive was actually starting to upset me.
On a lighter note, I REALLY, REALLY REALLY want to see "Yori" drive that damn car!

Squee! I want a car like at least with what sounds like an amazing paint job. :D I love shiny stuff. :3
Thank you so, so much for an amazing, fantastic update as always. :D I think I need an update on the teams though. XD
Anywho, I adore how this is going and I really look forward to the next update. :)

Thank you for a fun chapter.

Great chapter! Looks like the group they are chasing is one step ahead, but not for long. Love Haruka new car.

Excellent as always, though I do have to admit to a desire to have the Tendos and Saotomes hear from Ranma and/or Kasumi in their natural forms. Maybe sometime during the party, after Yori and the others leave? It would give Akane a chance to apologize, some true closure before she moves on with her life outside Japan, amongst other things.

Did not expect to see some of that. Some very nice backstory being fleshed out.

I liked the scenes with Haruka as well. Always nice seeing how other people are doing. Not to mention showing more history with Misaki as well.

Thanks again for another enjoyable read.

Slight plot hole noticed, you had Misaki mentioned being with Yori and Aiko when they were peeling apart the cubed van, didn't know she could be in two places at once. Otherwise good chapter. Haruka gets rehabilitated more, Hotaru has some fun, and the plot thickens around the conspiracy.

Yori, you're dealing with competent adversaries this time.

Nice, and Misaki was with Haruka and Hotaru so how could she also be with Yori and Aiko in LA? Love the story though. Keep up the good work and what's going on with Usagi and Setsuna?

Good

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more)

Love it. Hope to get next installment soon.