Reviews for My Naughty Girl
Guest chapter 1 . 5/10
Edward's really creepy. He makes lots of assumptions. He doesn't even let her answer when he asks if she trusts him...why would she? They don't know each other. Then he takes a teenage virgin to his playroom for her first time...asshole! And what is Alice, his personal pimp? Gross and Weird! How old was she when he almost kissed her in the kitchen? She must have been super young while he was in his mid to late 20s. Yikes! Plus, isn't it professional suicide to fuck your bosses teenage daughter!? The end did me in. They're in love!? Why? That's not love. That lust. And Charlie relenting in the end was bullshit. Never would happen.

I do love a dirty talking Edward, but maybe just not with older Edward and teenage Bella. The age difference and speed of relationship just wasn't my thing.
Stelle's Pen chapter 1 . 4/4
Hmmm! It's getting REALLY hot in here or what?! ;P
libbyg1980 chapter 1 . 3/25
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annettepattinson007 chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
I hope u continue this , so good.
Vampgirl Bitches Biteme chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
please write more!
dowlingnana chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
Love how they always find their way to each other. Hot o.s. thanx ;o)
biblepam chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Loved the line toward the end .. "as we made out like fucking teenagers."... especially since one of them IS a teenager... thanks for sharing your story... Pam B.
campyrs chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
Good o/s. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you!
robfans chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
Wowzers! That was awesome!
sambellezan chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Great story
romeosjuliet14 chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
I loved it so much! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This short story was good!
Mireads chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Very very good
acw1 chapter 1 . 12/13/2013

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