|Reviews for Spider-Man and Oola|
| XXXtheGODgood chapter 4 . 2/11
Spiderman's spider sense is to chaotic and disorienting for the sith also it could evolve with the exposer to midichlorians Midi-chlorians were intelligent microscopic life forms that lived symbiotically inside the cells of all living things. When present in sufficient numbers, they could allow their host to detect the pervasive energy field known as the Force.
| Danyael Prince chapter 4 . 1/13
*Please* say your gonna keep writing chapters for this fic...
| Jacebralor chapter 4 . 12/12/2014
so how much longer do we have to wait for chapter five?
| phantom00 chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
Spidey phone home!
| phantom00 chapter 3 . 8/8/2014
Dance I say, Dance!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
Will there be a new chapter? I want to know what happens.
| Tsamoka chapter 4 . 7/23/2014
This is actually quite interesting and well written. I'll be following this one with great anticipation.
| Rexfan1333 chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Really cool crossover, definitely going to keep an eye on this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
Man, I wish I was Peter right now. Forget M. J., green skin beats red hair. 8D 8D 8D
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/9/2014
Jedi MJ, meet Spider-Man. Heh heh.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
I'm just here to say that you got like every Spider-Man evers attitude wrong. No Spider-Man is going to be so subservient. Not only that, but he just punched a rancor out. I'm pretty sure he can break some cuffs if he did that. Not only that, but you had a rancor kill doom!? Doom is at the very least, half as strong as Spider-Man and would never-ever-ever get killed so easily. You also paced the story, a bit too fast. He just met this chick. An alien. And he is not freaking out. As far as I have read you haven't specified his age. Which spidey is this? I propose a re-write with more details. The grammar portion is relatively good, but the story could use some definite work.
| joronscott chapter 4 . 4/3/2014
Cap, Johnny, And Tiara? The Empire is screwed.
| Scott the Wanderer chapter 4 . 4/2/2014
Okay, Tigra, Captain America and the Human Torch with Spider-man and the rebels against a legion of storm trooper? Oh those poor, poor troopers.
I do love Leia's response to hearing how Spidey knocked out a Rancor, one of the few creatures in Star Wars that are a menace to AT-ATs and tanks. I can see her trying to imagine it and her brain locking up every time.
And Oola with force field generation and actual invisibility is going to be interesting. Wonder how long before she figures out how to hurl it like Sue does.
Wait till they get out of all this and Johnny hears about Zeltron...I could so see him going chomping at the bit to go there.
| Cylon One chapter 4 . 3/31/2014
Just about the most awesome chapter so far.
Reinforcements from the Marvel Universe for Peter and his friends and allies in the Star Wars one.
So that omake that had the FF making contact with Peter on Home One was serious, eh?
Aside from that, another awesome of this to me was of course Peter and the strike force running into those liberators of Empire prisoners and those they liberated on Endor.
Tarful: Bet Chewie will be happy to see the ol' chief again.
And also Luke’s future bride-to-be if that’s still to be in this universe.
Don't need to say who.
Just love that they’re in this as well along with the three Marvels that ended up on the same planet as well.
And the rescuers of those from an Imperial stockade sound cool.
It’s great that every time there is a new chapter so far there are such really interesting new things going on from what originally happened in the Star Wars universe that neighbors this one.
I am eager again for the next time.
Just want to say that when Tigra first made for the portal to help Spider-Man I admit I imagined part of the reason for doing so along with helping a friend was her maybe having a interest in him.
Not complaining if she doesn’t, just felt like sharing that.
| Sean Malloy-1 chapter 4 . 3/29/2014
Very nice job on the update, I look forward to more.
-Be nice to learn why Mara turned against the Empire.
-For a minute I though "Tannette" was going to be either Bariss Offie or Luminara.