Reviews for All Fall Down
soniabell chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
What a mess, this poor Bella brings me down!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
Thw Winner
sophiacorgi chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Great entry! Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest!
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Well written, could easily visualize the approaching storm, but felt this Bella is too hard to love. Left me feeling overwhelming sadness. Not hope.
Maplestyle chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This made me cry! Good luck!
BelleBiter chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I appreciate the way you've aligned & intertwined the charge of the storms with the personal dynamics of all the confrontations. It's the small details of each encounter that keep this grounded in reality - even through the lightning.

Good luck in the contest :)
Mooah chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I'm so pleased he got there in time. Really enjoyed reading this and would love if it continued!
Good luck in the contest (:
debslmac chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
loved this