|Reviews for All Fall Down|
| soniabell chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
What a mess, this poor Bella brings me down!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
| sophiacorgi chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Great entry! Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest!
| dpennell007 chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Well written, could easily visualize the approaching storm, but felt this Bella is too hard to love. Left me feeling overwhelming sadness. Not hope.
| Maplestyle chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This made me cry! Good luck!
| BelleBiter chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I appreciate the way you've aligned & intertwined the charge of the storms with the personal dynamics of all the confrontations. It's the small details of each encounter that keep this grounded in reality - even through the lightning.
Good luck in the contest :)
| Mooah chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I'm so pleased he got there in time. Really enjoyed reading this and would love if it continued!
Good luck in the contest (:
| debslmac chapter 1 . 12/11/2013