Please continue this story it's amazing!

Well Daichi is definatly Luffy's kid if he can keep up with him while eating.

C.D.

Great chap :D

The explanation as to why Luffy left and didn't return earlier is very believable.
Will Daichi accept his father?
Will there be more tension between them?
Can't wait for the update xD

Well at least we now know why Luffy wasn't around all this time.

C.D.

Good chappie! :-) when will Dai-san accept Luffy-san? Is Nami going to reappear because of a devil fruit or something like that or will she be a ghostly angel guiding them?! I wanna know. Tehe...

Thats a sad and cute fic! please update soon! D:

I hope that those two get close together. And I wouldn't be surprised if Nami taught Daichi to be a navigator.

C.D.

AMAZING STORY! KEEP WRITING, NEW CHAPTER NOW!

Happy New Year!

Nice chapter, it is good to see things from Luffy's perspective. It gives another flow to the story.
I am very curious about their conversation and what will transpire from it...
Good work

sweet story dude. keep going cause im a fan as of now!

It would be good if he used her weapon and was also a thief and had her tattoo on his body somewhere. SHe already said he had her navigation abilities, so I assume that means her sense for weather/current changes as well. Update soon, please! )

Nice chapter, I'm curious about what Daichi and Luffy will talk about, Luffy is supposed to be an adult now and the pirate king at that it will be interesting to see how he'll approach this sensitive issues with a 13 year old... Their situation is very tricky and akward.

good chapter i looking forward to next chapter :)

poor Luffy... :( he is so trying. more

It's really promising story :D Even thought the idea seemed a little bit weird at first ( I have to admit :_D ) but you can make the idea "alive" :D It works! You write really well! :) Can't wait for next chapters! :D