|Reviews for The Dark King|
| Mc chapter 5 . 11/16/2019
Where is the rest of this story? So addicting and also very upsetting that it’s incomplete like your other stories!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/3/2019
Worst story ever no memtion of the sm names
| LilLinkGirl chapter 5 . 10/24/2016
Soooo, no more?
| SerenityMorrison chapter 5 . 1/18/2015
Please finish this story, I am loving it. How you write is captivating :)
| michele magnolia chapter 5 . 1/16/2015
Seriously heart broken that this story hasn't been updated in years.
| slightlyxjaded chapter 5 . 11/23/2014
Hello! I see what you mean by this story being an epic! I know it has not been updated in ten years, but if you get around to it, an update would be lovely. I really enjoy this tale you're spinning with such wonderful details...so thank you for writing it. As for constructive criticism, there are many instances where you add apostrophes to make a word plural and times where you fail to add the apostrophe to make the word possessive. Also, the words "your" and "you're" seem to be getting mixed up. That was all I could find in terms of constructive criticism so I hope that helps!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/16/2014
This is really good I hope you can update it please!
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/16/2014
So excited to read the rest ufhhhhhhh this is going to be good. Mmhmmmm I can tell
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2014
I'm sorry for the review you got. The story is very unique and interesting and I think it will grow into something amazing which is why I'm sticking around. You have an amazing ability of being creative and descriptive. You're a good writer, don't let anyone try to undermine your talents.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Despite the obscurity of the beginning upon rereading it made sense AND was beautifully written. Good job I might add because it was a powerful introduction
| PhantomPotterGirl chapter 5 . 5/23/2014
damn this story is making my heart race. romans, gods, sexy endymion and senerity PLEASE UPDATE?
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/13/2013
Update update update pleaseeeeeeeer
| catgirl505 chapter 5 . 7/5/2013
There is no next chapter
| 9844 chapter 5 . 2/1/2013
Please finish the story
| caly-micaela chapter 5 . 1/21/2013
This is a great story and I would love to find out what happens next! I have a lot of questions especially concerning Malachite's interest in Serenity which was different for me