|Reviews for Kabra, Ian Kabra|
| CelestialBronzeLightning chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
Hello, and, since this is your first 39 Clues fic, welcome to the fandom :D
This chapter is a prologue, I know, but it usually isn't a good sign is longer than the actual chapter (since I personally usually skip author's notes).
But, the six lines you put were interesting and got me curious about what you have to offer.
The summary is... mediocre. But fine. (I'm no summary master myself)
My review would be longer, but I can't really say much yet, but you got me willing to read chapter two, so that's one point for you. :)
Have a wonderful day-