Reviews for Naruto Make-Out Heroes: Doujin Incest edition
DarkBlackDragon06 chapter 2 . 8/4
Love your stories so far keep it up.
narutoyugitofuu chapter 1 . 4/5
#4
HaretaSora chapter 2 . 3/27
you should keep this going it is very good
DarkBlackDragon06 chapter 1 . 2/15
Awesome keep it up!
Ifritfireking chapter 2 . 11/7/2014
I love most of your stories, but please, update soon. Or, write a story where naruto gets lucky with all the bleach/ narutoverse women. Also, can you write an one-shot between naruto and rosso the crimson from final fantasy 7: dirge of cerberus? She's really hot, thick romanian/ transylvanian accent, and a REDHEAD. That and I didn't like at all the way she died in the game.
Takai153 chapter 2 . 5/17/2014
Love this! Hope to see more soon. And if your still taking votes, I'd like to see "my red headed mother and sister's lust." Is there any chance of Naruto being able to use the shadow clone jutsu to gangbang all of them?
Silber D. Wolf chapter 2 . 5/11/2014
awesome
chiva1989 chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
I can't believe the amount of reviews saying this is any good. First of all it is smut, which is not a bad thing but smut gets read, like, always. BUT this is not good smut. The word choice gets redundant really fast, the plot ideas are worse then those of any porn film and the act is so badly written that I have to ask myself if the author even has had sex so far... I would guess no. While this might seem I feel that it is a bad thing to tell someone that whatever he does is great and that his shit smells like roses if that's not the case. Get the grammar checked out, use a fucking, fucking, fucking (see what I did there?) dictionary and for fucks sake write it half way believable.
StrongGuy159 chapter 3 . 3/14/2014
WILL ALL OF YOU STOP SOPA & PIPA ALREADY PLEASE & continue your story please!
mattcun chapter 3 . 3/13/2014
plz write more
Sabaku Ookami chapter 3 . 3/13/2014
you forgot to remove the http after the first word ._.

Also, most people have already been spammed with this bloody crap.
Nightmare Creed chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Sup guys, loving the story? Well you'll love this even better, Fox King is now drawing Doujins. :D If you want to know more, ask Fox King.
StrongGuy159 chapter 2 . 1/18/2014
Amazing 2 chapters continue please & I thought of good chapters they're called: The Gunslinger and The Keywielder (Yoko & Kairi) from Gurren-Lagann & Kingdom Hearts & The Guitarist & The Policewoman (Haruko & Lt. Kitsurubami) from Folly Cooly (FLCL), The Cy-Woman & Kunoichi (Makoto & Mei Terumi) from Ghost in the Shell & Naruto Shippuden, and The Bounty Hunters (Faye Valentine & Samus Aran) from Cowboy Bebop & Metroid with Naruto. What do you think Fox King jm?
Destroyerz123 chapter 2 . 1/10/2014
Nice chapter.
nightmaster000 chapter 2 . 1/6/2014
Great story.

Will you be doing cartoon crossover as well?

Because if you do may i suggest the girl's from the show's W.I.T.C.H and Winx Club. Will and Bloom are red haed's so they could fit in 4.

Anyway great story i look forward to reading more.
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