Reviews for I Did Nothing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you have Minerva NOTICE stuff in this. It always bothered me that she didn’t see the signs of abuse. I also love your version of Bathilda! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely magical. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was Ariana's name the word Bathilda would have used to destroy Albus? If not, what was it? (I have some guesses) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely fascinating and very unique! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome, Amazing, Fantastic and I bloody loved it! I'm awed at how intricately detailed this truly is! BRAVO! :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Typo you said stock bird to Augusta but also personal bird to Augusta |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore couldn’t have known. Jeez. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ain't enough alcohol in Britain for that errand. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyable story but there were numerous typo's and/or wrong words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very intense story towards the end of the chapter - well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A typo, "the importance of her son", should be "the importance of her grandson". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far, a typo "hold the discussion one", should be "hold the discussion once". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really really good chapter and lovely overall work. Truly a gem to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fantastic story! Thank you for sharing this with us. Literally the only thing in the entire story that was less than perfect was the hiding of the Stone; it’s super interesting to see how different stories convey that! I love that they reinforced the defenses, but I’ve also seen some other ways of tackling it that were just beautiful. In one rendition, I remember the author has the entire third floor set up, but the mirror was actually empty and the stone was hidden under a Fidelius elsewhere. I’ve also seen some where there’s simply no way to get to the stone: all the potions from Snape are poison, there is no flying key that fits in the door, etc. My absolute favorite was one version where the entire troll room was a diversion, and in fact the stone was hidden in a separate room underground that you needed to move a boulder to get to. The entire third floor was just a red herring. Anyways, I loved it! Great story, just wish they did a bit more inventive stuff with hiding the stone! 9.8/10 imo |
![]() ![]() ![]() I first read this story when you were posting it, and I'd forgotten how much I enjoyed it. It's always refreshing to see adults being adults and taking care of things properly. I will say that I would have liked a bit more insight into Albus' character in this story, we are getting everything through Minerva's eyes so everything is subject to her personality and biases. Heading on to read the next story red |