|Reviews for The Noble Hermit
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2023
I knew Soifon was a total fag
| Capalot1300 chapter 1 . 8/13/2023
fuck this harem bullshit
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2023
Wait so they are gay in this and they both want Naruto damn talk about fucked up
| kageknuser2710 chapter 1 . 6/3/2023
Loved the chapter, but I don't like how you portrayed Yoruichi.
I feel like you're using a less moral post banishment personality. As is pretty evident, these Royal families are pretty freaking strict. I highly doubt she would have been allowed to act in anyway that would let others besmirch their family name.
The canon Yoruichi is pretty much a product of a girl who grew up under extremely strict conditions, and was then given complete freedom from expectations and obligations. Making her loose person also doesn't make sense. Yes, she did show her body to Ichigo, but that was mainly because he is like a kid to her, and to get him out of his funk.
She was shown to be an extremely loyal individual who valued relationships highly, so her being the type to sleep around, just doesn't seem to fit IMO.
Anyway, awesome chapter!
| GHETTOKINGKAI chapter 4 . 5/29/2023
I've been desperately searching this site for a long time now coming back to this story, to see if ANYONE has been able to resurrect, or at least make their own version of this story whilst keeping all the same elements and quality and also same pairings in this story, this is so goddamn good and the world/character building is insanely well established! I love everything here, from narutos meeting and growing relationship with yoruichi, to his overall masked death at the hands of aizen, i also really love how you added harribel meeting naruto much earlier on in her life as a vasto lorde and also making her into an arrancar and narutos personal assitant and also potential love interest here. The interactions and fights in this story has been so well established and its sad to see that this story will likely never be picked up.
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/9/2023
Hey author-san you good alive or dead and gone to soul society.
| otakusage chapter 4 . 4/7/2023
Hi, I love this story. Are you still writing it? Can you pm to let me know when will you update the next chapters?
| Shadowy Rose chapter 4 . 2/28/2023
it seems, Aegis was indeed not back baby
| Fredward1 chapter 4 . 11/25/2022
Are you dead? Or is your writing career dead? Cause god damn
| Arashi Uzukaze chapter 4 . 11/21/2022
Is been 4 years, you plan on continuing?
| EVIL-SAGE chapter 4 . 10/31/2022
Are you going to continue this? PLS DO!
| srickards chapter 3 . 7/1/2022
Really good so far, i'm too invested now for it to be over lol tbanks!
| edbones100 chapter 4 . 5/22/2022
in other words you're dead
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/19/2022
| HyuunaRyuuna chapter 1 . 3/14/2022
children? father? with who?!