Reviews for Hidden
Witch chapter 2 . 4/10/2015
You really need to proof read this story and fix several things, it's super annoying.
lolqwertyuiop0 chapter 2 . 7/3/2014
more please the 2 part
EctopicKnight2 chapter 2 . 6/2/2014
Please update
DancingDorisDay chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Ugh. The description sounded great but the story so far is a complete fail. You have so many errors that are completely distracting and take so much away from the story.
Mariana Lestrange chapter 2 . 4/6/2014
Love the story, great start! Hope to see more of it, thanks for writing ;)
HermioneandMarcus chapter 2 . 12/25/2013
excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you
cause i really love this story
arowley chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
i loved it i am glad that happy found her i think she will be the perfect girl for him i hope she stays around i would kind of like her to kick ass on some of the crow sluts too
wabi-sabi1090 chapter 2 . 12/16/2013
Well . . . I see someone is making a claim. There's no backing out now for those two. Great chapter.
Hapsgurl80 chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
Awesome chapter please update soon
busybeekisses19 chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
They are so perfect for each other but now everyone is going to be asking too many questions about her and her relationship with Hap.
crazygirl1980 chapter 2 . 12/14/2013
getting very interesting cant wait for the next update
Mrs.HappyAnarchy chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
I truly believe this is going to be a good story.
Happyslover chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
I love the be beginning of the story I will read the rest sound good so far
evans516 chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
love it so far! can't wait to read more :)
Hapsgurl80 chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
Very interesting start please update soon
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