This is giving mad chainsaw man vibes. Naruto just wants some boobs.

This was going to be my absolute favorite fanfic ...up until ch 26. It takes a SHARP left turn that doesnt make any sense, the pace increase 3x too, it was susch a good story and then idk if it was just wanting to finsh or what but the last 3 chapter are so rushed, forced, and so different form the rest of the story that it feels so shoehorned in. Its a shame.

Thanks for a great story. Now on to the crossover. That is actually what I wanted to read first but I needed the background information so I wouldn't be completely lost.

I left this fic on pause for a long while on like chap 23 or 24 when he deserted but I'm glad I went back and finished it this is in my top 5 if not top 3 fics I've ever read there was a lot of ups and downs but the end result was great I'll probably go back and reread this sometime in the future ty for the great read sir noodles!

Danzo you idiot.

I admit to being a serial reader who rarely reviews. It is in part because I listen to the stories and am often working on something when chapters switch over. Thanks for your hard work and unique story.

Lol love the Eldritch horror omake, wish I could find a novel that goes right up to the same point then has someone getting obsessed with it and start delving in what they are and how to become one. Sadly the closest I've ever seen it url?sat&sourceweb&rctj& threads/lovegoods-guide-to-lovecraftian-horrors-hp-oc-si-ish.388120/&ved2ahUKEwi_5sTw2_b8AhVZp2MGHesuBh4QFnoECA4QAQ&usgAOvVaw0azlbVF1Cf231UrMi8BILN

Anywho loving your novel series, I think this is like my tenth time rereading the whole thing. Awesome work nailed the right amount of serious VS humor which is ridiculously hard to do. Also love the way your characters actually have real personalities and not even boring cookie cutter ones either but interesting oddballs and shamelessly fun types xD

Not that bad, honestly worth the hype it gets on Reddit

creo que es la quinta vez que leo esta historia y es simplemente espectacular 10/10
oye, deberias enviar a naruto y xanna a Bleach

Love it.

Love it.

Wait, do both of your protagonists have runic enhancements carved into them?

This first chapter is weird. It's far too long for a summary, but is written like one. Skimmed the lemon, but from what I can tell suffers from that same "telling instead of showing" problem.

Minor nitpick 1: "Xanna" sounds like a pretentious sci-fi alien name, but I guess I can give this a pass. After all, there are canon names like Might Duy.

Minor nitpick 2: since the whole of Naruto is based on a fictional Japanese society, it's more appropriate for Xanna to talk about something like "the Shinigami's scythe" for example, rather than "deepest pit of hell" which is very obviously Christian in nature. Little things like this are the small straws that will eventually pile and break the suspension of disbelief's back. Be careful.

Other than that you have a solid plot going, just... to put it bluntly, awful execution.

I bet Orochimaru is outraged now.

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