Great fic
But a little less lemons would have be better in my opinion

Thanks for this work, even though appears to me that a little before the marriage it started to be rushed i really enjoyed this, good luck in future ff.

Great work

I dont normally write negative reviews, but it feels necessary here. Why write your blatant author/reader self insurt hurling homophobic slurs? It’s digusting and pathetic.

Great story

Loved it!

I've read this ages ago and would send it to my friends cuz it was hilarious. I don't think I've ever told you how fun this story was lol

Shitty ass writing. This isn't even fanfiction at this point. You changed Kurama's name and changed a bunch of crap about the story for no good reason. Not to mention you're just a gooner who wants to write this shitty fanfic so you can jerk off to your self insert fantasies about fucking an anthropomorphized fox (so you're a zoophile!) I recommend that you kill yourself as quickly (or as slowly and painfully!) as possible.

If not, please delete your account and all fanfiction that you've written. Seek counseling and maybe even get yourself institutionalized. You need to have your penis cut off so you never get the frankly idiotic idea to upload fanfiction anywhere on the fucking internet. You shouldn't even write it down or think about. DO ANYTHING ELSE WITH YOUR LIFE BUT WRITE FANFICTION. THAT'S WHAT I'M SAYING.

You're an actual fucking waste of oxygen, do you know this? You've doomed us all. This is fucking disappointing.

Absolute Cinema

great job author, nailed it as far as I am concerned

Sinceramente foi uma boa história no sentido de originalidade e criatividade; eu mesmo só li toda a história pois detesto iniciar a leitura de uma fanfiction e não termina-lá; mas não posso dizer que gosto de naruto e kyuubi como casal ou do erro de colocar bijuus como demônios quando são apenas criações de chacra, também desprezei bastante o nome que deu pro kurama, pois é e também sempre será kurama.
Mas como tudo isso era só uma fanfiction comédia foi fácil de simplesmente ignorar e continuar até o amargo fim, mas toda a sua criatividade deve ser aplaudida e temida por quão louco é.

Hey, this story was amazing and I loved the ending. I don't particularly like writing long reviews, so I'll just say I look forward to what comes next ;)

Probably one of the coolest battles I've read.

Damn, this was a great chapter.

Poor writing. Disappointing

Gold just gold