Reviews for Reaching for a Dream
typos chapter 3 . 4/3/2022
the blondes strange dislike of shirts the blond's strange dislike of shirts

blonde - blond

fyi, females are blonde, males are blond.
typo chapter 3 . 4/3/2022
her fathers bridge - her father's bridge
typo chapter 3 . 4/3/2022
incompotent - incompetent
Guest chapter 3 . 4/3/2022
"sweat drop" is just as bad as face faulting. In writing, it just feels like nonsense.

Please consider editing it out.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/3/2022
"Sasuke face faulted in surprise"

Please don't use stuff like face faulting, it's cliched, and it just looks stupid in writing.

In the anime fandoms, it's one of the biggest bad fic warning signs.
Luciendar chapter 16 . 4/1/2022
I'm a bit disappointed at how little Fuinjutsu Naruto actually uses in a fight. He's taking his healing factor for granted and he's acting like an idiot berserker.
quinantine chapter 22 . 3/26/2022
Self motivation engine needs an upgrade. funny and a good story still.
uchiha-rune chapter 3 . 3/20/2022
Bruhhh, the shadow clone isn’t a kinjutsu, it’s a jonin level jutsu while the MASS/MULTI shadow clone jutsu is the kinjutsu because you need to make at least 20 clones
Jerm069 chapter 24 . 3/9/2022
That Omake was awesome!
Aedwards179 chapter 1 . 3/1/2022
the talk with the kyuubi (I refuse to call her that name) is just too forced...
Aedwards179 chapter 1 . 3/1/2022
Bijuu are too powerful they need some kind of weakness. that's why the sharingan works on them. its not "hax".
LordZarcon chapter 29 . 2/21/2022
Great stuff, a real tear jerker those last chapters were.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2022
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow... ekrktn
Draigor chapter 30 . 2/17/2022
TheDemonicReaper: *Reviews* lulz
Draigor chapter 29 . 2/17/2022
*sigh* I wasn't going to leave a review, but since you begged I will be nice, and give you what you want. This story is honestly a masterpiece! There, happy little Noodlehammer?
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