Reviews for Reaching for a Dream
Abyssalwhale chapter 14 . 1/17
I mean. I try to only read stories that have already been completed. But I still leave reviews either way.
Abyssalwhale chapter 3 . 1/16
Holy shit, this is hilarious. I actually skip over all the actual sex scenes but like just the reactions from the team. Especially kakashi fucking hell. Undead Tora is also brilliant. I'm definitely stealing that if I ever write a Naruto fanfiction.
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akumikoshiron chapter 9 . 12/25/2023
Fuck you mean "NUH UH Shukaku?
bibink729 chapter 29 . 12/7/2023
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Raiju001 chapter 29 . 11/22/2023
Nice! That was an epic ending! Thanks for that and I am gonna check out your other stories as well! Thank you for this one!
Raiju001 chapter 24 . 11/22/2023
Damn! That was the Plot Twist Bomb me turned earlier huh? Well done! That surprised the hell out of me but is also so in line with your world building and the additions you have added on here. Great story!
Raiju001 chapter 23 . 11/22/2023
Heh. That was an interesting ending to Ch23! Asking for Review Crystal's and the fact that they give power to the 'storyship' has me roflmao! That was inventive! This story has kept me very interested and even though there is some insane amount of power creep here, it is well done and feels more like Hellsing Ultimate Abridged instead of original DBZ cringe. TFS makes so many things fun! Thank you for the story Captain Noodlehammer! May your journey through Fanfiction continue!
Pawn22 chapter 5 . 11/16/2023
Being traumatized by cathulu
HalfBlood Prince chapter 30 . 10/29/2023
Honestly, the development of the romance was not to my liking since I think it was not clarified enough if it was an obsession or simply Naruto had created multiple personalities due to a psychological need, in addition to the debauchery in a romance between a "demon" from hundreds of years ago and Naruto felt too forced as there was no flashback or specific experiences from Xanna's past, but I definitely enjoyed the dark humor, so as an overall story it really was magnificent... thanks for the hours of entertainment... (:D)
HalfBlood Prince chapter 1 . 10/29/2023
It's a good start to the story, but I think the story was rushed if Xanna is interacting for the first time with a human including sexual relations. The "romance" is devalued if the story is highly sexualized with the relationship of an experienced demon with a child, rape, NTR, debauchery in general... (:C)
gberklou chapter 30 . 10/3/2023
saw the amount of favourites and likes and the plot of the story and got really excited to have finally found something Good, only to eventually realise this is just fucking porn
Sam chapter 29 . 10/1/2023
This is my second read through for this story. Almost better the second time! XD
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SvenTheDecoy chapter 24 . 9/21/2023
first off, love the story. it's certainly different from all your later stuff, that I also really enjoy.
it seems like all the absurd power ups. and random hax abilities that you've discarded apply only to the so called good guys. why nerf mokuton but leave all the rinnegan bs, or zetsu's stupid existence?
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