|Reviews for Twelve Days of Terror|
| Nivel chapter 11 . 11h ago
This is really really good. The first chapters were hilarious but now it's sad! Hope to see you update this soon!
| CobrasFate chapter 11 . 3/7
NOOOOOO! I need more! What happens next?! Amazing story!
| embagshot chapter 11 . 3/6
Poor Naruto! Itachi is really being twisted and Sasuke needs to get over his brother worship.
Are you still writing this? I really hope so, I really enjoy this story.
Thanks and hoping for the next chapter for Sasuke to fix things or at least realise he needs to! :)
| Imaginativequeen101 chapter 11 . 2/19
Are you going to finish this story? I really like it so i hope you will!
| LouiseUchiha chapter 1 . 2/19
People can say whatever they want but Sasuke is an uke.
| Lady Spain chapter 11 . 2/14
Looooove this fic!
| Bookoholic chapter 11 . 2/9
I must be on Broadway, the amount of drama is suffocating. Seriously though, Itachi's unhealthy obsession with his brother is creepy. Beating him I teach him a lesson? Will always see Sasuke as a child as a coping mechanism of missing his life because he beat the shit out of him? And Sasuke's 'battered woman syndrome' accepting it like it's normal? Really? That's some fucked up could have a field day with this. Psychiatrists could write a books about them. "big brother is watching you: it doesn't always mean the government folks", "why domestic violence doesn't solve your inner turmoils", "how far can a brother complex go without being labeled an incestuous stalker", "finding out your lover's psycho family's secrets and what it could mean to your relationship". Yeah, no, fuck that. I'm with Naruto on this one. Make like a porcupine in a balloon factory and get the hell out of there.
Please continue though, this story is exceptionally written, well thought out, and has my compete interest and fascination!
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/7
Its been a while since you last updated this story so I was wondering WHY? You can't just leave us at this type of cliffhanger for an entire month, people will die of suspense. PLEASE update soon
| Saya V chapter 11 . 2/2
Update please :3
| The Elegant Shadow chapter 11 . 1/27
Well, this was quite the gem of a chapter. I really liked how the drama and tension built up and the pay off, for the most part, was quite satisfying. That said, I do have a few complaints that I'd like to address.
Itachi, is, without a single grain of doubt, completely irredeemable at this point. Now, my reasoning for why he is irredeemable may be a bit different from that of others. Allow me explain myself a bit:
Itachi's ultimate sin in this fanfic isn't that he beat Sasuke up (on the contrary, he actually admits to how wrong that was, and genuinely feels bad about it. So I at least find him forgivable, but I don't think that Sasuke should forgive him, or at least, not give him hell for it later), it was just how his actions affected Saskue. Itachi in this story seems to be the strongest influence in Sasuke's life, and as that Sasuke feels incline to practically kiss the ground Itachi walks on. Itachi knows this and takes advantage of it, he manipulates, and cages Sasuke to the point that he seems less like a younger looking up to his elder, and more like a battered spouse with Stockholm's Syndrome.
To put bluntly, the worst thing that Itachi has done in this story is just how much he's molded Sasuke to bend to his will. He's taken the will of another, and twisted to suit his own, he may have had good intentions (I honestly believe that he does), but he's basically taken away Sasuke's ability to make choices for himself.
Another thing about Itachi is just how destructive his behavior is. His attachment to Sasuke is VERY unhealthy, and Sasuke honestly does nothing to stop him, he only enables him to act that way by not standing up to him. Sasuke's devotion to Itachi is also extremely unhealthy, at the point that Itachi can do and say so many stupid and horrible things, and still have respect for him, no matter how much he's done for him, Sasuke SHOULD feel some resentment towards Itachi, or at least more than he's shown thus far.
I do not blame Naruto in the least, a person can only take so much, and Naruto honestly endured a lot throughout this story. I honestly wouldn't mind if they took a break from each other, or out right broke up. That relationship, due to Itachi, could become very toxic, and could put Naruto through a lot of heartache if it continues down the path it's going. That said, I would like if they got back together, abet, so long as Sasuke isn't a slave to Itachi any longer.
That's really all that I have to say about this Chapter. It was a lovely read, and I do like how you painted what Itachi did in a slight grey tint. But this Chapter only proves just how screwed up the Uchihas are, which, from a literary standpoint, is great because it gives the story more layers and more to play with, but from a logical standpoint... without dragging this out any further, I'll just say that, "Dem fools need therapy!" XD
Awesome job. :)
| Xxferessa-TanXx chapter 11 . 1/17
nooooo pleassseee dont break up. Next chapter pleassseee I want to seee what happened next
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/15
:( so sad for both of them! It's not fair for either of them. I understand why naruto left him but I still feel sorry for and love sasuke. Update soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/8
Somehow I get the feeling that Sasuke's parents are going to stand up for Naruto later on... Just a hunch.
| ReiLuvsAllen chapter 11 . 1/7
where's the next chapter? :/
| Mrs.IanSomerhadlerJacobBlack chapter 11 . 1/6
ermygurd good for naruto. sasuke is being a btich :(