|Reviews for VP|
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/17
Please finish the story it is a good one so far please please finish
| leipyper9 chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
Ok...nothing against your writing. I like a little bit of age difference, but seriously, they are like 50 years apart, and I don't see vegeta as a perverted old man.
| thewonderingman chapter 9 . 7/5/2012
epic story dude/girl.
I really enjoyed it, it was so worth reading.
Anyways it was funny and romantic, erotic with a sprinkle of gayness thrown in, an odd combination, but makes for an intersting read.
Just keep doing what your doing, cause whatever that is it appears to be working.
so yeah, I really enjoyed the story so far hope you update soon.
| Dark Kitten Saki chapter 9 . 4/17/2008
Please update son!
| Dark Kitten Saki chapter 8 . 4/17/2008
For a girl who has hung out with gay guys before it was a heavy enough hint, but i like this story.
| Dark Kitten Saki chapter 4 . 4/17/2008
Kawaii! But, did you mean Trunks could tell Goten was upset, or visa versa? "Trunks could tell Trunks was upset."
| PanTrunksAlwyz chapter 9 . 3/21/2008
i absolutely LOVE this story i hope you finish it soon... mi would love to read more of it and maybe you could a very sour lemon involving pan and veggie...loved plz finish
| Music and Reading Lover chapter 9 . 1/11/2008
i love this story can you please update it. its been more than 4 years
| Bre chapter 9 . 11/3/2006
I LOVE YOUR STORY
PLEASE WRITE MORE
| VEDELLE chapter 9 . 6/24/2006
PLEASE HURRY WRITE A NEW CHAPTER I LOVE THIS STORY!
| Sakag26 chapter 9 . 7/25/2005
Ha Ha Ha Ha ! I can't wait for the next update! So do it soon!
| xMissMacaroni chapter 9 . 6/4/2005
o.O I read all these chapters today and I must say, it is very interesting! I don't really read these odd pairings, but this cought my eye. Anyways...I think all I have to say is that I really like where this fic is headed. I do hope that you update soon! Laters!
| Gemini ice 39 chapter 9 . 6/1/2005
Please, please, please don't be done with this story! I might just cry if you are! Update really really soon!
| Megan Consoer chapter 9 . 4/11/2005
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters. Can you write this story on
| Morbid-amour chapter 9 . 3/22/2005
Hi, I was just wondering if you were ever planning on updating this story. It's been about a year since you've updated but I know authors who have waited longer to update.
The reason I'm asking is because it's such a great story and I would love to see it finished. That's all I was wondering.
If you're planning on updating it would you be willing to e-mail me at Amour_de_Haine at hotmail dot com and tell me? If you aren't planning on updating that you don't have to bother e-mailing me.