|Reviews for Frostbitten|
| Gaiakun chapter 22 . 22h ago
Hello Arialene, I just finished reading your story down here in Argentina, and I was so moved about not only the story, but also at how well written it is. It is very rare to find such fine stories made by fans, usually they are just fluffy tales or spicy sex oneshots, but yours actually had substance. You found justification within magic, and that's a VERY hard task when writing a story such as this, most tend to fall for the "Deus ex machina" ending but luckly yours didn't.
I'm curious to see if you wrote more stories and I'll be excited to read them. You certainly deserved the success this fanfic has.
| Finite gravity chapter 22 . 2/25
God... G- God DAMMIT! What... Wh- what the HELL?! Too beautiful... Too motherFUCKING beautiful... This story takes the heart, caresses it, then fucking crushes it like glass... And at the end puts all the peices back together then just gives it a sweet welcome back kiss... Fuckin wonderful
| NedFynTanon chapter 22 . 2/24
This was definatly one of the most adorable stories I have ever read... now I don't want to read the other ElsaXJack stories. I just don't think they'll quite measure up ;)
| wanderlust in action chapter 22 . 2/23
This was so beautiful. Thank you for creating such a masterpiece! BTW, I cried -so much. :')
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 2/18
Beautiful piece for this ship. I'm in love. 3
Great writing skills too. The delivery was smooth, that was one of the winning factor for me. :3
In some ways it made me want to stay in a corner and just cry.. xD
There are a lot of Royal Frost blood now isn't there? Imagine the wishes! Can we make MORE spirits? ...No? I guess not. Bummer.. We could have gotten the old gang back together! ..Or at least Sven.. I like reindeers.. Can never have too much of those. BTW, was the guard outside the palace THE Sven? You know, in a reincarnated kind of way? xD
Anyway, minor plot hole with the Frost last name.. Since we were being technical with Jamie's. Kinda weird to consider it THE royal last name considering Jack was the consort in his union with Elsa.. But then again, it would be kind of boring to use Arendelle as the last name for the royal family, so I guess no harm done.. xD
Thanks for sharing. :)
| Lehna chapter 22 . 2/16
Thank you for this beautiful story! I couldn't stop reading until I reached the last word.
But I have a question: Do you think you'll write someday about the Guardians reaction to JAck's family, or their meeting with Elsa?
| Guest chapter 22 . 2/7
Good story love it very very very nuch
| Guest chapter 22 . 2/5
This story is amazing! It made me cry and it made me smile. It is very beautiful I love it!
| Courtney Hall chapter 22 . 2/5
Omg I LOVE THIS STORY! I'm sad it over:( this is a great story!
| MoonPrincess201 chapter 22 . 2/5
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! This is a great story!
| Bad Bitch Llama chapter 22 . 2/2
This story should become a published book! A movie!
It's just...amazing. There's not word to describe the happiness I felt when Elsa came back as a spirit.
| Raven chapter 22 . 1/31
Wow. It's 3'o clock in the morning and I finally finished this. Beautiful. Probably the best fanfic I have ever read. Made me laugh and cry. Thank you so much for writing this. -Raven
| Shiori Kudo chapter 15 . 2/1
If they met it 1823, and Henrik was 23 was he got married in 1852, then it would have been 29 since jack met met Elsa, not 27.
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