Reviews for Team of Demons
lee chapter 4 . 1/3
please update soon
Plasma57 chapter 4 . 5/29/2014
Great story, although I would like to have some details as to how Haku and Zabuza survived the battle on the bridge. Please update soon.
BrotherCavalier chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
I quit reading when what I would think to be the protagonist of the story basically rapes his 'brother's' sister. Ok for a smut fic, but this was not labeled as such.
Destroyerz123 chapter 4 . 2/7/2014
Lol. Ure lemons made so horny that I had to have xxx with my gf
Unnatural Reader chapter 4 . 2/7/2014
This was a great chapter... Had great lemons and the different scenes were well put together
bankai777 chapter 4 . 2/7/2014
it looks like that gaara and hinata will be a couple very soon.
Dancenightrose chapter 3 . 2/1/2014
Nice I can't wait tell I read more
Generation Zero chapter 3 . 1/13/2014
...No comment on Sasuke
Destroyerz123 chapter 3 . 1/10/2014
Yes! I've been waiting for another chapter.
agnar chapter 3 . 1/10/2014
Kind of a plothole with Itachi and Kisame finding Naruto like canon. In canon they went to Konoha and learned he left with Jiraiya, so it made sense.

Here, no one outside Naruto's group knew he planned to follow Jiraiya or where he'd be, so how'd they know where to go?

Is Naruto planning on adding all these women or are most of them just one night stands?
Unnatural Reader chapter 3 . 1/10/2014
Hahahahahah, that shit was funny as hell, great job... CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER
bankai777 chapter 3 . 1/10/2014
now that was a unique chapter.
bankai777 chapter 2 . 12/21/2013
i wonder if naruto will meet shion,koyuki and shizuka.
bankai777 chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
i wonder what would kushina say about fu's prank.
Destroyerz123 chapter 2 . 12/21/2013
I like it. Especially the lime/lemon
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