|Reviews for Dual Commitment|
| Guest chapter 28 . 11/14
have you forgotten about the story. ...so many of us are waiting for the update. ...common don't make us wait so much...update soon
| Guest chapter 28 . 10/17
Love this story, update please!.
| rissbenzo chapter 26 . 9/23
you did this chapter right! it was so amazingly beautiful, please don't ever give up this story, hell i even want you to have like 100 chapters, like a ordinary book, because this story is the most realist and the most beautifulest shit i have ever read, so thank you. :)
| rissbenzo chapter 28 . 9/3
please, update I'm seriously missing this story, its making me physically sick just thinking about it.
I know this is your story and i love it!
but a unexpected pregnancy would be so freakin cool!
and i hope to god Bella and emily, don't get away with what their planning && i hope Leah doesnt get hurt, I love this story.
you should write more like this, i know id read them.
love from a fan. :)
| rissbenzo chapter 27 . 9/3
loved this chapter.
| PastOneonta chapter 28 . 8/9
Welcome back! This story continues to be fascinating. I am glad to hear you are well and the lump was benign. That must have been a very stressful time. Of course we understand that Dual would wait.
This was a great chapter. I love the emotional opening and awakening of Paul. He has so much love to give if he would allow himself. Jake is fun. Leah is loving and caring of both of them. I appreciate the moments where Paul or Leah feels overwhelmed. The story wouldn't feel as genuine or the characters wouldn't feel as genuine if they didn't have a moment of doubt or questioning.
Bella is one hell of a miserable malicious mean spirited person. I forgot how money hungry she is and how she would sell out anybody for more money. The story of the prenup almost had me laughing. Who cheated on who first costing them the most money? What a way to live! Love isn't even relevant! But Emily has been sucked in and shame on her. She doesn't have to do it but she chose the wrong path. What will she tell her son when it all blows up?
Thanks for the update. We appreciate your sharing with us. Who is Emily's cousin giving her the gossip on Leah!? And how does Bella plan to take out Leah? She can't turn Jake and Paul against Leah I don't think. Looking forward to the next update when you're ready!
| cloudshadow22 chapter 28 . 8/5
So glad to find your update - and even gladder that your biopsy was benign. Have been through that waiting twice with skin cancers, so I know how stressful it can be. This Bella is soooo OOC; such fun to have her as the class bitch rather than Leah. Watching how Paul in opening up to Leah's loving words makes me smile. Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing as always.
| Demoness-MarlstonWells69ner chapter 28 . 8/5
Emily and Bella? Great team ...
So just to be sure. Both are jealous? Bella because another woman is getting the money, richness, and luxuries.
Emily because she's jealous that Leah is more outgoing than her? Therefore Leah has more friends and personality?
*Shakes head* This is going to end badly. For Emily and Bella I mean.
I can't wait to read that!
Please update! Soon! NOW!
| rocklesson86 chapter 28 . 8/4
I am sorry that you had that scare. Both Bella and Emily are fucking delusional. There plan is going to fail. I cannot wait for more.
| brankel1 chapter 28 . 8/3
| Inosolan chapter 28 . 8/2
I was so happy to see you back sweetie. And desperately relieved to hear you're okay after that scare.
Beautiful new chapter. Our trio is entering a new normal aren't they? I love how they are learning to always communicate and check in with each other. Bella and Emily make an awful little duo don't they? Little selfish monsters. I hope they get kicked in the teeth for whatever they are trying to pull.
| Carmeldlite chapter 28 . 8/2
Thank you for continuing this. I am a little confused as to why Seth would confide to Emily. I would hope that regardless of his age, he wouldn't forgive Emily for her betrayal unless he wanted to rub Leah's success in her face. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/2
firstly really glad to hear that you are well. ... I really hope you
or anyone never have to go under such circumstances. ...so ladies be
alert and go for your monthly check ups...and secondly was really happy
with the update...though would have loved a really long chapter but
still really happy...actually took an half day from work as soon as I
saw the notification of the update as I a live in India it was morning,so took the first half off to read it and have read it thousands time
from then...so really eagerly and desperately waiting for the next
update. please do update soon...take care. ...god bless.
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/2
firstly really glad to hear that you are all well. ... I really hope you or anyone ever have to go under such circumstances. ...so ladies be alert and fo your monthly check ups...and secondly was really happy with the update...though would have loved a really long chapter but till really happy...actually took an half day from work as soon as I saw the notification of the update as I a live in India it wad morning an took the first half off to read it and have read it thousands time from then...so really eagerly and desperately waiting for the next update. take care. ...gid bless.
| Jeniesethebeast chapter 28 . 8/2
I'm glad your okay! And I hope Bella gets hit in the face with a brick!