Reviews for Monkey Fox
arinasution5 chapter 7 . 10/21/2016
Blandusername chapter 1 . 2/6/2016
I wish you would finish this
ZeroKCross chapter 7 . 1/16/2016
Love the story hope you update soon.
Eadane chapter 7 . 4/9/2015
This is a very nice story line you got here, hope you update this soon
bloodlinenaruto chapter 7 . 1/18/2015
Reichenfaust chapter 7 . 7/24/2014
Great story so far, love the ideas you have flowing in here. Way to go for originality, and seamless ideas. You took a period not really well known in the manga, with some really unknown characters in the manga, and took them to new heights. Especially with the personalities of Danzo, Hiruzen, and Hashirama. Wonder if he will work for the Light from the shadows, or maybe thats where the Fire Temple got its techniques... That Buddha Hand Projection Technique looks similar to Hashirama's Mokuton:Laughing Buddha, albeit on a much smaller scale.
Ejammer chapter 7 . 7/22/2014
great chapter loved it but whens the next one out
also does naruto have a kekkai genkai?
L chapter 7 . 7/7/2014
Great story. I hope for more chapters.
byakuren-chan chapter 7 . 5/31/2014
WHACKHEAD chapter 7 . 3/24/2014
Great chapter but ended a little too abruptly.
Yaoifangirl102 chapter 7 . 3/24/2014
Cool cant wait to see what happens next
anarion87 chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
great story so far
RandomWriter21 chapter 7 . 3/22/2014
Been waiting for this update, great chapter!
KamiNoDoujutsu chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
Okay how the hell is Inoichi in the beginning when he isn't supposed to be alive? He's not even a thought but miraculously he's there to read "young Hiruzen's" mind? You need to fix that. It was good up until that and the whole cliche "Shinobi & Civilian council" meeting. I'm not trying to flame but why does everyone have to use the made-up shinobi/civilian council idea?
JWolfcat chapter 6 . 2/7/2014
Congrats on creating an interesting AU. Are you going to have Mito still summon Kushina to take over Warden duty for Kyuubi? Is Tsunade still going to fall in love with Dan? I think that Naruto should have a telescopping spear, the kind that has a blade on both ends ans can be split with a chain connrcting the middle.
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