Reviews for Monkey Fox
Eadane chapter 7 . 4/9
This is a very nice story line you got here, hope you update this soon
bloodlinenaruto chapter 7 . 1/18
Reichenfaust chapter 7 . 7/24/2014
Great story so far, love the ideas you have flowing in here. Way to go for originality, and seamless ideas. You took a period not really well known in the manga, with some really unknown characters in the manga, and took them to new heights. Especially with the personalities of Danzo, Hiruzen, and Hashirama. Wonder if he will work for the Light from the shadows, or maybe thats where the Fire Temple got its techniques... That Buddha Hand Projection Technique looks similar to Hashirama's Mokuton:Laughing Buddha, albeit on a much smaller scale.
Ejammer chapter 7 . 7/22/2014
great chapter loved it but whens the next one out
also does naruto have a kekkai genkai?
L chapter 7 . 7/7/2014
Great story. I hope for more chapters.
byakuren-chan chapter 7 . 5/31/2014
WHACKHEAD chapter 7 . 3/24/2014
Great chapter but ended a little too abruptly.
xdevil-childx chapter 7 . 3/24/2014
Cool cant wait to see what happens next
anarion87 chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
great story so far
RandomWriter21 chapter 7 . 3/22/2014
Been waiting for this update, great chapter!
Kami No Doujutsu chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
Okay how the hell is Inoichi in the beginning when he isn't supposed to be alive? He's not even a thought but miraculously he's there to read "young Hiruzen's" mind? You need to fix that. It was good up until that and the whole cliche "Shinobi & Civilian council" meeting. I'm not trying to flame but why does everyone have to use the made-up shinobi/civilian council idea?
JWolfcat chapter 6 . 2/7/2014
Congrats on creating an interesting AU. Are you going to have Mito still summon Kushina to take over Warden duty for Kyuubi? Is Tsunade still going to fall in love with Dan? I think that Naruto should have a telescopping spear, the kind that has a blade on both ends ans can be split with a chain connrcting the middle.
Ejammer chapter 6 . 2/2/2014
good story
Darkwill0w chapter 6 . 1/27/2014
I enjoy the plot but you should get a beta reader to help point out and or fix the multitude of small problems that still exists. Some are small like wrong words used or grammar but most of them are more that the actions and way people say things are sometimes unnatural and feel unlike how anyone i reality would act or speak.

Mostly these problems where in the early chapters and becomes less and less with each chapter but you should look into it. I think your losing a lot of potetial readers because they cant get past the first chapter or two. They have some glaring problems.

But i think the plot and story so far is great and you should continue!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/25/2014
Are you going to add Minito and Kushina if so how exactly are you going to include Naruto's parents seeing he is older then them.
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