Damn shame this isn't ongoing, you merged the two universes quite well.

It’s rare to see so many cliches payed absolutely straight in one chapter.

Update

This Story cries for justice and demands an update or revival by another author!

this to gud to be left and forgotten!

ALL HAIL BRITANNIA!

Pity you stopped updating new chapters

This is like reading a mediocre translation of a Chinese Web novel. Not necessarily bad, but just really awkward and sometimes difficult to read.

The English in this is really awkward.

Well... fuck. So short but so intriguing. Shame this is abandoned as the premise and execution so far was so much damn fun. While it did read like a series of mission reports given the frequent perspective changes the fic still worked. Alas, nothing to be done but hope for your return someday. Cheers, mate.

Where da Orange and da Supreme Ninja Maid Go?

Loving the story! A pretty cool concept of Humanity accepting and inventing 'Immortals'. Add that with the Mass effect conflicts and you have a fun, action-packed story. Although there were some grammar and minor errors, it doesn't really affect it too much. Maybe just the sciency-stuff is a bit confusing. Either way, I really hope you continue the story. Hope you well!

Good stuff

Hope this updates again someday.

Argh, this was a fun read. Pity it seems to be discontinued. Oh well, here's hoping that Fukkatsu no Lelouch would bring back unfinished fic writers next year.

Its a wonderful story. I hope its not abandoned.