Very cool. Interested in where this goes.

lots of promise.
keep up the good work

This needs more love!

Good chapter

Time to give it a personal touch!

Pretty good

me gusto este capitulo , espero que el siguiente capitulo salga pronto

this seems to be awesome... other than spots of horrible grammer.

The Holy Alliance of Brittania
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knightmare frame 4.5m
knightmare suit 1.8m , slightly taller than a normal person
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i am 1.95m tall and i see the average human height at 1.7m to 1.85m
in cannon a normal knightmare frame 4m to 6m
in cannon a special/custom/super knightmare frame 6m to 12m
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even if over time tech improves/advances to a higher level alowing for compodents/parts to be minturized
the overal devise/machine should not be made smaller unlees it can still have the same amount of raw fire power of the larger/older version
if it does than go ahead and make it smaller so it cost less but if it dosn't then just put MORE compodents/parts
OR one that is the same size as the older version but better quallity/capability into the devise/machine
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in this story i beleive it would be better if
special/custom/super knightmare frame 8m to 10m
normal knightmare frame 6m to 8m
since you say/want the knightmare suit to be half ,or less, the size of the knightmare frame then
knightmare frame 3m

Man I can't wait to read how the counter attack will play out and what will be the end results nice work

Loved the action of this chapter it was a really one-sided battle but still entertaining

I gotta admit the first chapter got my attention can't wait what happens in ch 2

Wait so how did kallen became immortal I mean is she like Cornelia and Nunnaly where there virtual beings or did he somehow give her immortality also curious to what happen to suzaku but I digress good story curious on Lelouch plan

Meh. A bit too much of a curb-stomp for my tastes. I'm also not sure I bought your explanation for why humans don't use mass effect technology.

Epic story mate looking forward to seeing what happens next.