Reviews for The Alliance of Brittania
invinoveri chapter 5 . 8/27/2014
Very cool. Interested in where this goes.
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 5 . 8/6/2014
lots of promise.
keep up the good work
Partsu chapter 5 . 7/29/2014
This needs more love!
edboy4926 chapter 5 . 7/21/2014
Good chapter
Es93 chapter 5 . 7/21/2014
Time to give it a personal touch!
OBSERVER01 chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
Pretty good
Geasszero chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
me gusto este capitulo , espero que el siguiente capitulo salga pronto
tylermech66 chapter 3 . 6/27/2014
this seems to be awesome... other than spots of horrible grammer.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/23/2014
The Holy Alliance of Brittania
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knightmare frame 4.5m
knightmare suit 1.8m , slightly taller than a normal person
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i am 1.95m tall and i see the average human height at 1.7m to 1.85m
in cannon a normal knightmare frame 4m to 6m
in cannon a special/custom/super knightmare frame 6m to 12m
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even if over time tech improves/advances to a higher level alowing for compodents/parts to be minturized
the overal devise/machine should not be made smaller unlees it can still have the same amount of raw fire power of the larger/older version
if it does than go ahead and make it smaller so it cost less but if it dosn't then just put MORE compodents/parts
OR one that is the same size as the older version but better quallity/capability into the devise/machine
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in this story i beleive it would be better if
special/custom/super knightmare frame 8m to 10m
normal knightmare frame 6m to 8m
since you say/want the knightmare suit to be half ,or less, the size of the knightmare frame then
knightmare frame 3m
Yankee718 chapter 4 . 6/21/2014
Man I can't wait to read how the counter attack will play out and what will be the end results nice work
Yankee718 chapter 2 . 6/21/2014
Loved the action of this chapter it was a really one-sided battle but still entertaining
Yankee718 chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
I gotta admit the first chapter got my attention can't wait what happens in ch 2
madking97 chapter 4 . 6/19/2014
Wait so how did kallen became immortal I mean is she like Cornelia and Nunnaly where there virtual beings or did he somehow give her immortality also curious to what happen to suzaku but I digress good story curious on Lelouch plan
Heir of the void chapter 4 . 6/16/2014
Meh. A bit too much of a curb-stomp for my tastes. I'm also not sure I bought your explanation for why humans don't use mass effect technology.
Vengeful Astartes chapter 4 . 6/15/2014
Epic story mate looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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