Reviews for The Alliance of Brittania |
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![]() ![]() ![]() also add kallen if it is a harem |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like the story but i wish the chapters were longer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Factions in code geass are supposed to possess energy weapons, aren't they? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice update. Like the explanation for Cornelia and nunnally. For lelouch's wives or wife, I think that you should make them immortal like him simply because them being digital humans woul be creepy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I'm hoping for Kallen myself, I look forward to your ext chapter |
![]() ![]() Hmm..., you need to increase the word-count per chapter preferably by 1.5k in addition to your current amount. You also should think about getting a beta for some of the minor mistakes you'be made; particularly dealing with grammar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder how the humans will react when they realize the batarians are slavers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the start of this story please keep up the great work and update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's nice that you update your fic Anyway nice chapter and more pls Btw keep the length at 3k to 4k pls |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well...I feell sorry for Turians...they are going to find out what angry Cornelia...wonder how bad it will be for them..he he he |
![]() ![]() ![]() For Britannia! lol the batarians are screwed on one side for unprovoked hostilities and on the other for activating a relay |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting, I'm liking that but please don't make the humans too overpowered in comprason to the council |
![]() ![]() ![]() . . . You misspelled Britannia . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHHHHH This is getting interesting really soon. |