Reviews for The Alliance of Brittania |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hope to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE CONTINUE! I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot wait to read more! Nice work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. I'm okay not. The pairings are good. Thank you lol |
![]() ![]() I liked the chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm kinda disappointed it's Kallen and Lelouch tbh :( CC love the story though |
![]() ![]() K.O! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Somewhat rough, but I've found a taste for Lelouch doing the Mass Effect thing, haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. There are so many ideas well developed it is astonishing. Keep up the good work ! |
![]() ![]() The Grammar of this story could use some work. It's a great concept,but a reader can only be so ignoring and lenient of grammatical mistakes. One other issue I've found is the point of view, it seems to me like you are jumping from 3rd person to 1st. Don't, it's really very confusing |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1st [Code Geass] fic I've read and it's awesome O_O Hope you can post more soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Exiting! A little short though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wowo se pone bueno |