Reviews for Going Home
B chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
This was really sweet, and the detail you put into it was great! The only thing I'd say is you should take out the "flashback"s - they take away from the story. Putting it in italics is enough to alert your readers that it's a memory.

Great writing!
bluebird10023 chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
aw this was so good!
icanhascamaro chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
Beautiful! I don't even know this series (I have you on author alert from another category), but the way you write this was flawless. I almost cried at the end!