Reviews for Ships in the Night
Doragonko chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
At first I was really pissed cuz you were having Jacob cheat on his boyfriend instead of just breaking it off, but I love the twist at the end _ _. This is a great story!
asm chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
a great surprise ending.
Uki96 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Oh my GOOOOOOOOD! I was so sure Jake was cheating on his man but no... Well done i haven't thought a sec that Emmett was Jake's lover but god it was so exciting! I love Emmett and also Jake and see them as a couple... It's just pure lust!
I hope you'll be updating this story i really wanna see what the two of them are going to do!
angeltrin1 chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
Oh this is sooo sweet! I love their dynamic and how they realized that communication really IS the only way for true relationships to last! Well written! Thank you!
Marie One chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Great one shot.
JustTheSlashMaam chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
haha wow, throughout the story I was like, wtf Jacob, don't cheat on him, talk to your man, make it work lol good twist :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
Not sure why the second half of my review was lost, as I was saying not a big fan of one shots due to them feeling rushed suspense and longevity waiting for chapters. I did however enjoy this even if it was AH (I do like my vamp on wolf loving) ;) you had me wondering who Jake's bf was right up until Em fucked Jake without a condom and I knew then that Em was Jake's bf and roleplay was involved.
All in all great os
XxxJakexxx
Lonewolfboy chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
Awww that was so cute and lovely, I'm not really into one shots because they always feel too rushed, this however I really enjoyed right from the
rubyblue100 chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
Wow... Write more please!
HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
awww! it's sad when relationships change - so glad emmett rekindled things between him and jake. thanks for sharing!
aidabye chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Great story, loved the way you pulled that little twist at the end. So glad he wasn't cheating. Well Done. LOL You are tricky.
HeartRobward chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Thank you for a great story!
I'm almost scared to ask you to continue. They are at a good place now, and it can only leed to angst ...
brynn.brigham chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Aww loved the twist of them already being together. It was sweet how Emmett wanted to try and fix them. This was an awesome one shot. Would be great f you ever go back and add to it
elfprincess8 chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
Wow! That was one hell of a one shot! I'm honest when I say that I was spending my time trying to figure out who Jake was with! What a shocker when I realized it was Emmett all along! Good one girl! You had me going! Oh, and of course, the sex was smoking hot over the top like always! Please think about continuing this one!
Twihardder chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
Interesting twist there at the end. Which brought a huge sigh of relief. Even before the talk of making love, they didn't use a condom . For strangers everyone knows that's frowned upon. My biggest relief was the knowledge that Jacob wasn't in fact cheating. Whew! The flirting was exciting! The lemon was hot!

Thank you for writing my favorite non - cannon couple! Merry Christmas indeed!
I will continue to keep my fingers crossed in hopes that inspiration will consume you for furthering this story.

Thanks for writing and thank you for sharing!
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