Reviews for Pandora's Scions |
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clavina chapter 2 . 1/2/2014 The Alliance have neural implants ?! Oh this is going to go down well with the Colonials! Bring it on! |
clavina chapter 1 . 1/2/2014 Oh this is just pure genius! Awesome start! Can't wait to see how this goes! |
JovianJeff chapter 3 . 12/30/2013 Another delightful chapter. Covering the natural incredulity on the Colonial's side and a very human partying on the Alliance's side of the story. Some wonderful humor sprinkled in that felt natural, like Mal's and Alex's conversation and then the line about dealing with children and the Quorum. I thought that bit was perfect. A good set up chapter establishing each side's mentality before the actual meeting comes about. Loving the journey, hope to see more. Thank you for writing it. |
thunder18 chapter 3 . 12/29/2013 Great chapter Update soon |
EvilTheLast chapter 3 . 12/28/2013 Good update. |
syed chapter 3 . 12/28/2013 These hypermines will keep the fleet safe when they find a home, i bet salvage from their home planets would be very profitable. Also, great forward position to act from. I wonder if using cylon tech, they can give the brain ships organic bodies to use instead of robotic.. |
Inverness chapter 2 . 12/26/2013 This is interesting. Looking forward to more. |
JovianJeff chapter 2 . 12/22/2013 Another wonderful chapter. I thought it was a brilliant move on who was going to be sent to the Colonials. It made sense, so much so that I've got to wonder why more authors don't take that approach. The chapter was rounded out with the meeting going on at Galactica, with the speaking freely part placing a smile on my face, the irony of her statement was delightful. A great chapter of meetings leading up to more as this sage unfolds. |
EvilTheLast chapter 2 . 12/19/2013 Looks like a start to a great to a great story. |
gunsbuster chapter 2 . 12/17/2013 wow |
orionastro chapter 2 . 12/17/2013 very good new chapter. lets see how the meeting with the Colonials will go . Cant hardly wait for the next chapter . |
JovianJeff chapter 1 . 12/15/2013 This is a fantastic beginning! Love the inclusion of The Fleet, and what you choose to include of that series, the Battlestation, the history, albeit alternate, and the ship/brawn partnership. Your own nice touches, with a happily married couple, are an added spice to a great mix already. Good first meeting, the hope on the Colonial side was great to read, you expressed it well, humorous too with the gods must have something against us part. That was certainly a roller-coaster ride for them up with hope, down with despair several times. All well done and I look forward to the next chapter. Bravo sir! |
orionastro chapter 1 . 12/15/2013 very good beginning for the Story, Both The Cylons and the Lizards, will have a very nasty Surprise when The Alliance full military might falls upon them , and Crush them . Cant hardly wait for the next chapter . |