The main reason I was willing to read this was two-fold. 1) it had Harry change into a girl, her similarity to Bella in appearance is a happy accident; 2) you labeled it as femslash.

There are several things that bothered me at least a bit while reading (the skipping of any real romance arcs, said romance(s) not feeling like any romance (there was almost no real emotion in them besides horny), some parts were a bit over dramatic (like the Manor scene, when she stepped in you narrated what happened almost as if it was a legendary event. It came off reading really weird and over the top), occasional missing words and misspellings (minor and easy to overlook considering I liked the overall plot), you forced too many plot ideas into one story (I don't remember half to OCs you introduced), and there's more but I overlooked them because I enjoyed the overall plot and the way you handled politics.

However, there are two things that immediately kill a story for me. 1) the MC is a guy; and 2) the MC is in a pairing with a guy.

I'm going to be a bit blunt in saying that I'm kinda happy you dropped the story where you did. If it had continued on for say, another 20 chapters, I would've been more upset because despite listing earlier Alya's interest in only women, despite saying there are various ways for her to have an heir without marrying a guy, you still twisted the plot to have her forced into an arranged marriage. If there was more to the story, I would've felt like I had wasted the last two days of my time. Because frankly, if I knew that would've been an outcome, I never would have opened this story. However, as that's not the case, I'll say I did overall enjoy your story and I'm just going to pretend this last chapter never happened

The first chapter is so weird like where did her name come from?

so more please

I've been rereading this. still a great story. any chance of new chapters? thanks

Really wish I hadn’t read the last chapter, especially since the fic is dead. I have to assume the fic would have eventually resolved the problems brought up in this chapter but because it’s dead we will never know and thus it ends at an extremely unsatisfying place.

Well, this chapter basically kills my interest in the story. Forced marriage is cringe.

Sad there isn't more of this - great story!

This is a great story, i really enjoyed reading it but im sad since there is no more chapters to read.
I really hope you finish the story some day.

This is the second time I've been enjoying a good story just for it to be completely ruined in a single chapter. Probably for the best it was dropped.

Even if we ignore the forced marriage, portkey kidnappings are just incredibly lame plot points, also, portkeya don't make you faint so she should have been able to fight her way out of the problem.

I can only assume a momentary lapse in sanity.

So, did Remus know too?

And dropping

i have been enjoying this story thanks for sharing

So why isn't Harry looking for a ritual to go back to being himself? He clearly doesn't want to be a girl.

So after living his entire life as a guy, Harry turns into into a girl in some freak accident and he just accepts it like that?

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.