One thing I'll point out here is you spent time building up to the important ritual, even skipping over the details of the practice run, then kinda skipped over the ritual and just said it worked.

WTF ending it right there?! That's fucked up.

What a way to leave a story. Something this caliber, despite the many spelling and grammar errors deserves an equally good ending.

Ugh... I wish there was more man. That ending though is very good. And such a gdamn cliffhanger.

Update, Update, Update Please.

I'm really enjoying this fic so far, the only gender swap (when gender changes mid fic) fics that i enjoy are ones that happen because of events done to Harry purposely like in this fic and in Second Chance instead of some weird potions accident in others.

This was soo good, please continue. I loved it. What happens next? How will the blacks react? Will her friends like the Bones, Hannah and family plus her own family fine out she used to be Harry.

Please please finish this story you cant just leave it like that please

I've really enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing.

far and above one of the best versions of this, much enjoyed, even on a second read

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Sorry had to get that out. Anywho, i think you have a amazing story here. Well written. The only thing i mite have done differently is, make the summer one story and then make 6th year in to a sequel. But other then good story

Please update soon as you can.

Please update when you can.

Oh come on! How can it end there... Srsly that's just so mean :(

It has been three years since the last update.

So wondering it you will ever finish this.

Plus wonder what was up with Rosemerta the owner of the Three Broom Sticks with her calling out "Blood Trader". But I can guess we're Alya/Harry is getting ported off to That nut job Tom Riddle.