| Reviews for Iteration: The Perks and Pitfalls of Talking Too Much |
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  Guest chapter 8 . 5/26 Jasper is a fucking bitch |
 NKubie chapter 9 . 3/5 What a fun way to end the story! And I love that they're at That Place and will soon be going to That Other Place!And Alice...Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| NKubie chapter 8 . 3/5 Woo hoo...again! How did they go so long without kissing in the first place? And for all his cocky bravado, Jasper just wants to be part of a family too. Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| NKubie chapter 7 . 3/4 That was a spectacular job of parenting, Edward, and I mean that in all sincerity. Firm, but loving. That is EXACTLY what Jasper needs! And now Edward and Bella can finally get to That Place!Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| NKubie chapter 6 . 3/4 Jacob bein the "Black"mailer...not a shock. But he was surprisingly stupid. Good riddance! And while I'm sad that Edward felt the need to delete Bella fully from his life, I can understand the need for distance. I never thought I'd be so happy for an ILY between Edward and little Jasper, but I really am! I'm so glad that Edward is moving forward with the adoption, I'm just worried about what Jasper's parents will do when they find out about BITE. Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| NKubie chapter 5 . 3/3 Now I wonder if Jasper is behind the blackmail to get attention. Edward really does need to step up his game with Jasper! Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| NKubie chapter 4 . 3/3 This is taking an interesting turn. And I bet Bella has it right. Jasper might be better off if he shared more space with Edward. Jasper really doesn't need a wing. He already has two parents that don't interact with him. He doesn't need another. Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| NKubie chapter 3 . 3/3 I had a feeling there was more to Alice than was obvious. Also, I'm pretty sure that Jacob is the "Black" mailer. But I think you meant for us to know, or at least suspect. Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| NKubie chapter 2 . 3/1 Is Bella crushing on Edward, or is there something else going on? Hmmm. Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| NKubie chapter 1 . 3/1 How had I never read this story? Jasper reminds me a bit of Swirl. I wonder if Alice is hos Daisy. And incorporating the Twi vamps in the game? Genius! Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| byeedward chapter 1 . 12/18/2024 I had no intentions of exploring Twilight fic on here, but after reading this, I'm hooked! Made an account just to send in this review and say that this gave me so many laughs. The way you write - I have so much to say but don't know how to put it into words! It makes me apoplectic... my new favorite word. Thank you for this! |
| Heather Mythic Bitch Chandler chapter 6 . 11/7/2024 I'm SCREAMING I knew it! |
| Heather Mythic Bitch Chandler chapter 3 . 11/6/2024 'This fucks' PLEASE I AM SOBBING. Review limit is my worst enemy when it comes to you. |
| Heather Mythic Bitch Chandler chapter 3 . 11/6/2024 Okay hes laying the 'Black'-mail real thick. Jake is that you?! |
| Heather Mythic Bitch Chandler chapter 1 . 11/6/2024 OH GOD HOW HAVE I MISSED THIS STORY. You are literally my fave and if you ever publish you can have all of my money. Thanks for posting, you FUCKY GENIUS |